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Keep it up and do the rewrite as a new story, that way you keep your reviews from the old one and people who already reviewed the old one will be able to review the new one.

Well, that depends on how you feel about it. You wrote this story 6 years ago, and it is an example of your writing then, and how far it has come since then. I enjoyed the story while you were posting it, and would enjoy it rewritten. Have you written other stories, or will this be a way to dip your pen in writing again? Enquireing minds want to know!
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I’ll totally reread the story if you go over it. It’s pretty good already but if you want to make it more coherent then go for it!

I say fill the plot holes! I love this story! The more, the better!

If you feel the need to rewrite it then go for it dude I’d reread it if you do so but if not I think it’s okay as is for the most part but that may just be becuase I haven’t read it for a bit

I like this story but I does need a good going over again. Maybe keep this version up and make thw rewrite a separate story

Great story

This was nice! I had a great time reading this!

Kagome is bi-polar first she's yelling and screaming next thing we ALL know she's sad and apologizing then she's mad ALL OVER AGAIN like tf

This story was really well done and I really enjoyed it all the way to the end.

Fucking people are so inconsiderate. Who's bright idea was it to make Koga Kagome's boyfriend? They have like NOTHING in common with each other. They don't see eye to eye on the same page. Like really... at least the teacher was nice to Inuyasha. Those bitches are gonna die if they keep insulting him by using that insulting offensive name 'half-breed'.

Oh god... Sesshomaru is such an asshole in this fic. Why am I not surprised. *sighs*

Just popped in to read the first chapter, the summary sounded like it had potential. So far it's not bad, but there are lots of inconsistencies with which tense you are writing in (describing the characters actions as if they had happened, versus as if you are watching them happen presently. He said versus he says,) Also I would work on developing a more captivating opening to the story, so far it's quite bland and doesn't really inspire the reader to continue. Thank you for sharing your work with the community! I'll keep reading to see how it goes :)

wow! love this! you should write more stories! :)