aww. so sweet. Please update soon.

Oh god... I made it through like the first few paragraphs up until the army soldier comment... I gave it another chance though. The very next fucking paragraph killed it, again. Do not read this story. Cringe is a sickness and it will give it to you.

Absolutely love this story! I'm crushed to find no sequel. I would love to finally see some alone time between the two new lovers. I was looking forward to watching them get to know each other! I hope you consider a sequel!

I just read this in one sitting. This story is severely underrated. I'm so glad I found this gem! I loved it. Thank you so much for sharing. I'd love to read more about their adventures and learn more about Xia's heritage ! Feel free to pm me if you'd like to chat about it !

Loving this work keep this up

Excellent read, highly enjoyed your mixture of vocab, appropriate speech for each character, intensity of moments. Hope, you're still an active writer, I very much regret having stumbled over you just now. Meine Hochachtung!

Amazing story, I really enjoyed it. Hope there is a sequel to it in the future.

ENjoying it

keep up the good work. Hope there is going to be a sequel or she at least gets some hell hound pets.

Keep up the great work. It would be awesome if they took the giant ship, lol.

KILL KILL KILL

I hope he dies painfully

This chapter was really good, I like how you hit the emotions with it

PAris ou Stupid little fuck

Wow, twist