Reviews for Remnants of a Lullaby
constellation.composer chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
Because it's amazing, that's why you do it to yourself. But I'm sorry you have to go through that.
faramirs chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Whydoyoutoywithmyemotionslikethey'resomesortofplaything?!
FarGreenCountrySwiftSunrise chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
PAIN! AGONY! Very good job. Thank you for writing.
LineOfDurin77 chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
This is so beautiful. 3 It made me cry. :'( I know this is sorta late but I just found this recently-ish and wanted to say... wonderful job. :)
Midnight Promise chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
Dear Neocolai,

You are a terrible, terrible person - WHY DO YOU MAKE ME CRY?! I decided to give it a go between these two brothers, and this story is my first, and you BREAK MY HEART. :'( It was epic, it was fantastic and I want more.

That moment when that dream is broken and Thorin realizes that it's not his brother he is finally showing love to, but his nephew. Just. . .the FEELS!

I am becoming incoherent, so I will end with this. You are a fantastic (just terrible in making me cry), and I would love to see more from you about these two bros. :-)

Stay spiffy,

MP
Targaryen Princess chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Beautiful :) Broke my heart! :(
Arlothia chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
Why? WHY?! I ask you why!
Ugh this was too much! This was beautiful and heart-wrenching and you always do this to me!
So just to make sure I'm reading this correctly, that bit at the beginning with the adorable secret language and the trip to the market was all actually Kili but in Thorin's mind he desperately wanted it to be Frerin, right? I'm pretty sure that's what happened (which makes it all the more tragic).
I always want be believe that Thorin, Frerin, and Dis all got along with each other when they were younger, at least for the most part. But then I read something like this and I sort of latch on to the idea that maybe Thorin was sort of a jerk big brother and it just kills me!
Even though I don't know if my heart can handle much more of this...PLEASE DON'T EVER STOP WRITING!

Keep it up!
Arlothia

P.S. Where did you get the picture? It looks familiar and I'm positive I've seen it on tumblr but I'm not totally sure... Thanks!
IsThatBloodInYourMustache chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
My...my heart... you broke it! I had tears in my eyes at the end :(
I've enjoyed your work in the past and this was done just as well! Great work!
Booksnake3 chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
I'm crying now :(
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
That's cool, I didn't need my heart anyway. You can have it. What's left of it.
Tricia Pevensie chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Oh, God I'm trying so very hard not to cry! Ach nevermind... Oh Thorin!
Italian Hobbit chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
I WAS SO CONFUSED BUT THEN IT MADE SENSE. WAHHH. That's so sad! I need more Frerin from you!
Aranel Mereneth chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
Dammit you made me cry!
Oblivian03 chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
Why indeed? Very touching by the way. Good job.
Ballykissangel chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Oh my... I hope you're happy that you brought dwarf sadness into my reading life again, just as I was getting better :p
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