| Reviews for McGee's Surprise |
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   ScarletRainbow1 chapter 18 . 8/11 Thank you for a wonderful story. I just finish Chapter 19, but the summary doesn't state that this story is Complete. If there was more to come, please come back to finish Tim and Harry's story. |
| Larenars chapter 19 . 7/17/2019 I really enjoyed this up until the last two chapters. It just feels as though McGee dumped his NCIS family as soon as they stopped working with him. I'd think Tony and Gibbs would need their family as much as Harry needed to not have them effectively drop out of his life even if it is in favor of another set of grandparents. Still I really enjoyed the rest. |
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 19 . 6/20/2019 A very interesting story here so far! Looking forward to more! |
| Nemhain2009 chapter 19 . 12/19/2018 Enjoyed reading your story! |
| dianaanne chapter 17 . 12/3/2018 I really like this story; I hope it continues. |
| Jewel Becky chapter 2 . 11/4/2018 Just a note, Tony is 10 years older than Tim, Gibbs 24 years older than Tim. |
| badluck-ngprod chapter 19 . 8/20/2018 Very good storyear. Would love to see where it goes from here. |
| Millie072 chapter 18 . 6/30/2018 This maybe A/U, but bureaucracy is the same all over. The new director couldn't have fired Tim & Ziva without just cause. With their records, a sideways transfer or being kicked upstairs is most likely. What happened to Abby, Ducky & Jimmy? Has Sirius returned to England? What happens to Sarah? Penny will love Tim no matter. Very different plot twist. |
| Millie072 chapter 12 . 6/30/2018 Per the A/N, where could anyone get the idea Gibbs wanted Tim dead so he could have Harry? Are they reading the same story? What comes through is Gibbs becoming a grandfather to Harry, while finally healing from the loss of Shannon & Kelly. Amazing how different the rest of the world sees Dumbles. Will you explain the golden robes his rescuers wore? Like this story immensely. |
| RAY chapter 4 . 3/7/2018 I LOVE THIS STORY. I just finished chapter 4 Well done for a first timer,I hope that you post new chapters soon. Best Regards,Ray |
| ScarletRainbow1 chapter 19 . 3/3/2018 Thank you so much for this wonderful story. I hope to read much more of your writings in the future. Again, thank you. |
| Kitty chapter 19 . 12/28/2017 The end? Awww. Hope there will be a sequel. A lot more to share. Good story. |
| brendafay chapter 19 . 9/30/2017 love it more please? |
| MageVicky chapter 2 . 9/11/2017 I'm sorry, but you lost me as soon as I got to the part where McGee spends hours explaining the history of the wizard of world, only for Gibbs to laugh in his face and tell him that practically everyone in the agency is either a squib or a witch or wizard. |
| misswitlock16 chapter 19 . 8/9/2017 I like it hope you add more |
