Right in the feels...

I ran into this fic a couple of days ago, and I devoured it. I have read hundreds of fics and I can honestly say that this has to be one of my all time favorites. You have a an incredible talent of making characters feel and act so believably. If this is what you can come up with just by adding one OC, I'd be amazed at an original story from you. Thank you so much for the amazing journey; it was an honor to read your work. -TheSeabast

FANTASTIC fanfic.

HOLY MOTHER F***... So I only found this story recently and in a span of only 2-3 days I've read the whole story. It was I think seriously the best percy jackson fanfiction story featuring an oc. Your character penelope was definitely no mary sue in my opinion. She actually responded to the situations she faced in the story with thoughts and opinions and feelings that were valid. I absolutely love the interaction between the characters especially of course between leo and penelope. Gah so many feels they were so beautiful together! XD The other interactions between the characters were really well done as well and the dialogue both between the characters and indivually was really good too and I think that you captured what each of them were about perfectly :) speaking of characters I think you did great character development here as well. Ahh you honestly made me become so attached to them especially that I seriously thought I could experience what they were going through ahh! Crying like a baby in every sad part lol. Your story telling and story was so good you had the right amount of everything needed action, adventure, fun, happiness, humour, drama suspense and of course love your story was not overly cliche or mushy or sappy either which is a definite plus :) gah you're just too awesome this story has inspired me to read the rest of the percy jackson serues with the other demigods that much more keep up the good
work!
Can't wait to read the oneshots and sequel

HOLY MOTHER F***...I just found this story not too long ago and I like finished reading all of this in a span of like 2-3 days. I haven't even read the series with all of the newer demigods of jason, leo, piper and co but honestly this story has inspired me to want to read the other installments of the percy jackson series even more. You're story was amazing most of the percy jackson and heroes of olympus stories I
have to admit are not that good well the oc ones anyway but this is by the best I have read and I thank you for making an oc that is not a marysue well in my opinion anyway I believe she actually has a brain of her own and valid responses and feelings to the situations in the story especially for someone who wasn't meant to exist. OMG. HER AND LEO TOO PERF. I HAD SO MANY FEELS AND CRIED WHEN SHE DIED GAH her and leo are so beautiful together. I also really think and liked that you had some really good character developmentI tthink as well as the dialogue between the other characters and with their thought processes really suited who the character was. And the interaction between the other characters themselves were good. You put in all the right amounts of fun, happiness, suspense, action, humour and of course the love too which was not overly cliche or mushy at all. I will probably go back and reread this story again lol thank you for writing suh a great story and I enjoyed my time reading it
Keep it up :)
Looking forward to see the sequel

Then I thought, 'NOW YOU'RE HOING TO KILL THEM BOTH?'

First I thought, 'WHY WOULD YOU KILL PENELOPE?'

I cannot stop crying, like seriously this story broke my heart so much. But anyways can I say that you are an extremely talented writer? Like seriously good.

The only thing I would change is that you put more spacing between your paragraphs, there were times where I got lost and re-read sentences.

But seriously I think this is one of my favorite fanfics, Im kinda sad that i found out about it all late and stuff. I feel like this deserves wayyy more reviews than it has. I really hope more people read this so they too can have the experience that I had.

Loved this chapter!

Also i like the beggining when Leo found Penelope BEST FANFIC EVER CO IN SIDE WITH ANOTHER FANFIC

This is the best story ever !

Great STORY ! Couldn't you make it so one or two of the demigods's reward was for Leo or Penelope to come back to life. But you're descision does make this book that much more intresting

this was a great story!

Aww [F*** Insert other swear word here] This is so sad ... Amazing Story definitley beautiful.
Only so many fanfiction can be this good.

Great Story. I Have to admit I was kinda forcing myselft to read around chapters 30-38 but then this and least chapter pulled me back in. Great Story Again!