Nice story, I enjoyed it. I think the OOC-ness worked well and didn't seem too farfetched or anything like that.

I'll tell you what I think...

This is amazing!

You have no idea how much I loved this.

Wow. Cool. Excellent.

Wow, this was really good. I'll admit, I am definitely not a Yuri/Yaoi fan, but I decided to give this a chance! I like how even in third person, you called Minamo Nyamo, like it was actually her name. At first I didn't know what to think of that but I realized you had a reason for doing it.
Good work!

This was a cute story. I really liked how you portrayed Yukari. It's not very often you see a more caring side to her. Keep up the good work.