Really liked it. Thought it was written very well despite very very minor and understandable grammar mistakes. Loved the plot and storyline. Keep up the good work.

So cute!

It's good but I kinda wish Haru had showed up when the burglars were there and just kicked ass, but your story was cute

That was so beautiful. A great story indeed

Awww! This is so great! I love seeing Makoto as a protector and you have written this piece beautifully. :) Plus I may also have a problem with a poor physical/emotional injured Makoto. Lol. Anyway, great piece and I love it so much!

love love hurt!makoto :D Its the absolute cutest when he needs comforting! :D

ooh this awesome, we get to see a very protective older brother though I wished those bad guys were caught and see more of the parents emotion in all this .

I am really in love with this story :D

Well-written story! I love how you did it, how you worked the plot and how you worked the characters. He was still scaredy-cat-Makoto but he was also have-to-protect-my-sibs-Oni-chan. The whole thing was great. You just had a few spelling/typographical errors here and there, but a little proofreading and it's perfect! :)

I love this. Nice work :)

Thank you. I was having so much feels because of the finale. And this really helped... in stirring up more feels. Hahahaha. Honestly though, I really liked it! XD this is just one of those must read fics for the makoharu shippers. I hope you write more of these lovely things uvu til the next

Great fic! I love hurt comfort and this was really well done. You really kept them all in character too. Thanks for sharing! :)

i feel like i want to punch those robbers

i loved it and theres nothing wrong with hurting them as long as they dont die :O! xuz then id be balling my eyes out :C

So adorable!