I love it! Your ability to describe the scene yet stay in Darien's head is excellent! Encore, please!

It's a shame you never finished this. This chapter is excellent.

Please say you'll still continue this story. I love the detail. From Darien's thoughts of QSM and the pain increasing, even to Golda's description throughout the chap. It is such a simple story plot, but it is so well written that it's like I am watching it unfold. Please say you'll finish this story.