| Reviews for Shouldn't |
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dcarot chapter 15 . 6/21 "She smiles one of those secret smiles that says: I know things 'bout you that no one else knows." That's what love is all about. Love the way you put that. |
Emo4 chapter 19 . 6/14 I really like this story. I do wish there were a epilogue, maybe set 10 years or so down the line or 20. kinda looking back over there start after J was done in the military. |
EveCort chapter 13 . 5/31/2019 The amount of fucking slut-shaming, Jesus Christ. The squad is mad at Bella because some guy tried to beat the shit out of her and rape her? That’s her fault? Lol ok. At this point I’m mad because yea Bella spiraled sure but really? You’re going to make her feel like shit because one of the guys she slept with decided to be a psycho? Bella didn’t ask for it. No one asked for it. Fuck her fake ass friends. |
AmandaGrey13 chapter 19 . 5/8/2019 This is one of my favorite Bella Jasper fics. It's so beautifully written I can't stop reading it once I start. I don't even know how many times I've read this story I love it so much. |
marysix chapter 19 . 4/12/2019 This story really got to me. Tugged on all my heartstrings. I’m glad they finally figured it out. I’d still love an eventual futuretake or something. Anything. But I’m happy they got to here. Thanks for sharing. |
Saralynnb chapter 19 . 3/22/2019 I've read this a few times now and I swear it just gets better each time. Thanks for sharing. It's very well written and keeps you hooked from the very beginning. |
twi nana chapter 2 . 11/29/2018 .GOD. Don't throw this away again you 2-go B for being honest. |
twi nana chapter 1 . 11/29/2018 no regrets, you regret what you DIDN'T do, not what you did...hugs |
MiccaF chapter 19 . 10/2/2018 Loved this story! |
calorraine chapter 19 . 9/25/2018 I don’t think I’ve cried harder reading a story then I have through this one. This is by far the best story I have ever read. Not because it was well written but because you gave me hope. I used to be like Bella was in those four years Jasper was gone. I hated myself for the longest time and felt as if I don’t deserve to be happy. However, reading your story has given me some what of a sense of peace within my self. I’ve done a lot of forgiving of myself and I hope to someday turn out like Bella in your story. Thank you for writing this, you did a wonderful, wonderful job. |
SeptimaBode chapter 19 . 9/25/2018 fuuuuuuck i loved this so much. |
cheryl.gail chapter 19 . 8/20/2018 So glad I came across this story. While I love the ending a glance into the future would have been nice. I am imagining Jasper coming home a little more broken than he left but that they heal together. Thank you for sharing this truly emotional but wonderful story. |
Purple Pulse chapter 19 . 7/1/2018 Wow, that was beautiful. I have never read a Jasper and Bella pairing before. You may have converted me. These characters had so much depth, I guess there is more you could have explored but I feel like any more could have dragged it out. It was intense and beautiful, and they weren’t perfect. I really wish I could see that future take, I have put this story on alert just incase. Thanks for this :) |
noncanonqueen chapter 19 . 6/20/2018 how the hell have i never read this before?! it is so fucking goodddd. jasper is perfect. I wish there was more. brilliant work. just brilliant. |
Guest chapter 19 . 2/21/2018 Wow, this story was Perfect, because every one makes mistakes, the perfect person doesn't exist and talking about real people you can understand how important is forgive yourself before pretend to other people do for you. By the way, I hated this Alice and finally I ended in love with this Jasper Thanks for your time Regards |