i loved this story . you're such a amazing writer time to move on to your next story thank you for given us this awesome opportunity to read your stories.

Ah, yes the sequel.
(squeal!)

Hm, how put this into words? I love, adore, happily invest myself to the Greys family story. And I love baby Teddy! (sobs)

As my previous review, I'd like to point that you did great job with their littlest little thing. I love how Ana and Christian interacted with the baby. Like the first dad-son conversation (or should I say one-sided conversation because the adorable baby can only coo and babble nonsense? Cuteness overload!) and don't forget the mom-son bonding throughout the story! It's so wonderful that Ana embraces motherhood so perfectly. She rocks!

Oh I adore my favorite little family!

This is so precious. Whenever I need some baby Grey time, I seek your fanfic. It's priceless. It's endearing. You really good at writing simplest, most emotional scenes! Ah, I LOVE everything about Teddy here! (sobs)

And Kate and Elliot! Haha, I love them! Bittersweet though it is, I found your story relatable. Kate is an interesting character to read (and maybe write) and I like the side of Elliot that not goofy all the time. And the part where Ana comforted Kate and Christian calmed Elliot down, is just so powerful. I like their interactions. Aw, and don't forget the wedding!

Also, Jose. I really didn't know his 'related-character' regarding certain series, or before ELJames changed 'Master of Universe' to Fifty Shades (hell, I didn't even read the said tetralogy!). But I always found he is not the 'third-wheel' in FSOG world. For me, the premise of FSOG is pretty clear: love story between 'two' people. So I felt rather ambiguous towards him. But having read here, I think you did give him justice. He's not my favorite person, but he deserves the best nonetheless. What you wrote here finally put it to rest in my mind. I like that he's friend with Christian. Jose is a really good man.

As for Ana's past. Good job! I love how you write Carla in this story. I know she appears hands-off and not-invested in Ana's life. Maybe that's because of Ana's birthday and Jack accident in book three? But I like her in book one, though. I agree that she seems more like a sister to Ana than a mother, but hey, that's their story. I knew there's something fishy about husband number three. And here, I'm satisfied about how you tied the lose ends in the original series. It clicks, and fits together. And this is an interesting part that you put to rest too. You are the greatest canon writer I've ever known!

Never a dull moment with the Grey family! Hm... If you consider writing canonical fanfiction in the future, I wonder what would you write? Argh I can't wait!

What an amazing story you gave us your readers. I'm thankful for finding this jewel and let you know how I love your writings. Happiness Doesn't Last for Long and The Good Will Come will always be my favorites of favorites. Like the idiom in my culture: at the end of the dark, rises the light. And your fanfictions are the light, indeed!

Thank you for the journey. I do hope you write more canon story of Greys, though I found your alternate universe' one is wonderful! Maitrise rocks! Can't wait to reread your trilogy!

Please write more, and please don't stop writing!

Best regards,
Horizon.

This story will forever remain one of my first, and Definitely my favorite, FSOG FF story. I’ve read it at least 5 times over the years and it never gets old, boring or predictable. It’s hella hot, romantic, and attention grabbing each and every time I read it and such a great “what happened after” the series we all love. This author is a favorite and each time I get a chapter update for her new story I get crazy excited. Only thing that would make things better would maybe be a few more 1 shots on some spin off events for TGWC ( like Ana getting creative telling Christian their pregnant for the 2nd time, etc. ) either way, love love love this !

Oh My! Just finished this story and I have tears running down my cheeks in joy and adoration of what a truly delightful and captivatingly beautifully written piece of art you gave us! Brilliantly executed storyline with lovely lemons and heartfelt dialogue. Thank you again Chelsea! Love you, on to the next adventure. Liz S.

Nice story

I enjoyed this story so much. Loved the ending

I so enjoyed your Fifty Shades Fan Fiction. Do you have more stories written?

This was so good Thank you for your story telling I've really enjoyed reading.

Thanks for this great final. Great balance with the Ana's family in this part of the story. Always the Grey's are the center of the scenes in every FF putting Ray and Carla out and are occasionally included. But, here you show how important are they for Ana and how C grow to be part of both families. Thanks. Sad because I finished the story but love the final!

What's wrong with Dr. Green here? I think she was good with C before. Why is she acting like that to him now?

Where is Gail?. She wasn't presented to Teddy or helped when Ana arrived. No one mentioned her for her service at all.

Your are great. I thought you don't have a baby yet. But, you was great describing how difficult and hard can be having a baby, the long time in pain and all the ansiety that a woman have during the labor. And then, you have the sensibility and perfect perspective to give the time to tells what happen after and how painfully is the recovery after the C-section. It was very reasonable to let Ana being in the hospital various days. That's the real process after the cesarean. In other FF just put Ana as a wonder woman recovered. Hello, she never past about a operation so have to be hard, painful and needs time to process and recovery. I know that about that and you did a great work here in this process. I loved.
Xc
And giving a story to Ray that was amazing. I'm always love him because is a reflection of my own (step)-Father*, who past away after hurracan Maria. ;( HE was the better father I ever haved, although when my real father is in my live.

Kate está insoportable. Ugh! Qué se cree?

This is my third time reading this story and I just love it so much! The plot, the way you write and simply everything here keeps me on my toes chapter after chapter. So sad to be reading the epilogue once again but so happy for such a beautiful story. Good work, it was amazing!

Wow, even though thats the end it makes you want to read more, like it keeps going and going, but its the end and then you go onto the next story.