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PheonixShadow chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 This was morbid and without hope but very so beautiful. Got to love insanity because they're made that way. Still people eh. :3 Thanks for the lovely piece! |
Slivering chapter 1 . 9/19/2013 God, this was too much. It scared the shit out of me. Fuck. Remember when you said that you're going to attempt to make us nervous every time you update? It is seriously happening. I look really calm on the outside, but I'm a mess on the inside after reading this. Because at the beginning, I just assumed it was okay. I assumed Fuji was a jerk. But I didn't...it took me awhile for it to hit me. That Fuji was like a rapist and a psychopath and god, Ryoma, run for your life. I don't even...can't... And...I don't even have words. Except...wow. Like, ugh, Ryoma. Love him. Wish I could protect him. And the worst part is...in the beginning, the way they were talking...it seemed like they were okay. "In today's news, 19 year-old Echizen Ryoma was found on the side of the road in the outer ring of Tokyo. He was held and tortured for almost 9 months by the infamous mad man Fuji Syusuke. The police were sent to the location directed, but found only an abandoned house. There is no word on how Echizen is doing now." - This is THE line that made my blood run cold. It gives me chills. It hurts. It was like, a shock, almost, I guess. Because the beginning was kind of vague, so you weren't exactly sure what was happening. Then, Bam, just hit us with that line, huh Sy? That was beautiful in a really ugly kind of way. If you get what I mean. This line just stuck out to me, so I though I'd let you know: " It came to their attention that he hated any form of contact and blue, any sign of it, sent him into a state of oblivion for hours." - yeah. I think I'm done. You're great at this. I don't think anyone can match the angst you pack into 1k one-shots. Usually, I'm never emotionally touched by anyone's writing unless it's a LONG progression of a story, because I've grown to love the plot and characters, but with you...geez, one line can have such impact. Okay. Love this. Want more. Bye. |
Airy89 chapter 1 . 9/17/2013 This fic make me almost cry...so touching Wonderful story |