The moment where Shepherd just yelled into the sky was priceless.

Man the first half life had a lot of living weapons huh.

For a soldier that had to take down army of monster alien and almost died for humanity... I have a hard time to beleive he would elt himself be ordered and down right humiliated by a 15 something years old midget...

that and his suit can stop fhotgun from point blank as you repeatedly write... so being hit in the arm wouldn't not crack anything expect the golem itself...

The Nihilanth?

I thought I killed you?

Wow, this is impressive work with the original twists and takes here. So much good intrigue between the time of Shep's arrival and 14 years' worth of teleportation between Earth and FoZ. I'm disheartened that this hasn't been updated in a long time now that I've reached the end, but thanks for the great read and I hope that this gets picked up someday.

For my readers, I have started a redux version of this story. Yes it is i, Jeggetts. Got locked out of my account and had to make a new one... three times...

Like I said, new version of this story is up now.

Is the story dead?

Time for Sheppard to slap a bitch, Louise. No more baby sitting

Kill kill kill kill kill kill. Where are these thought? Not in this story apparently. I hate 'kid gloves'. Just let Louise burn! BREAD FOR THE BREAD GOD!

Hoping to see this continued soon _

So...Many...References!

i just finished the first chapter saw the last line; hes royally fucked lol

They get massacred by the Combine. Then Shephards tortures Chloe a la Guts because shes like a Black Ops.

I would like to follow this story. It is very good. the law a year ago but when I saw that you came back and you kept writing, I felt love for this story again. I love . I would like you to follow her. cheer up!
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Will Shephard end up with Siesta? I always thought that Saito in the show should've been with her.