Moc hezky napsáno! Well done

If I was Tony I would have dumped Ziva a long time ago. She’s a total pain in the butt. I don’t care how much you love someone, the amount of effort he has to invest in her...Not with it. He should have moved on.

Škoda, že tento príbeh som neobjavila skôr. Celý bol úplne dokonalý. Ten koniec je nádherný, skoro som nemohla prestať plakať. Je to veľmi dojemné a je to krajšie ako som si to predstavovala ja, takže ďakujem ti za tento skvelý príbeh a príjemný pocit, ktorý mám teraz.

I love this story thank you very much for writing it!

Wow! Fabulous fanfic! Great writing! Tiva forever.

AHHHHHHHHHHHH I HATE YOUR CLIFFHANGER AND I HATE MY SELF TO NOT PRESSING THE NEXT BUTTON FAST ENOUGH AND NOW I HATE IT THAT UT ENDS!

*Cough* *cough* hmmmm anyways great story. One thing I got to comment on is that your story timeline is very short, like in towel only a day have gone by and they are together and on this one it a week of romance. I hope your story of Christmas meeting will last more then weeks or month and goes into years.

Where is the shot gun when I need it

Lol thought tony hate Lawyer lmao

Absolutely awesome! Great writing! You are very talented. Tiva forever.

Hi Beatrix! What a powerful and lovely story!What I enjoyed to read it!
What I laughed,cried and makes me angry with this two!
Should be that way,that finish the wonderful story of them...but no,"lets kill the character", lack of imagination,they have,but I keep my hope,that on end of show, they will give the happy ending!
In here,we still didnt arrive to 13 season,we are still watch the 12 one...
I will put this one in favourite stories,may I?
Take Care!
De Portugal.
Carla Cascão

I'm curious as to whether or not English is your primary language. I noticed throughout the entire story that your grammar is...off. It's reminiscent of American Sign Language grammar or the grammar that someone might have if English is their second or third language. Might I suggest finding someone to help fix the grammar in your stories? The plot is good and the story so far is well developed but the grammar mistakes are making it harder for me to enjoy it. I don't mean to criticize you unfairly or make you feel like your writing isn't good, I just thought that I would mention my thoughts.

Sequel please, and I have a great idea for it if you need some help with it! :-) you're my favorite author on here, I have read all of your stories, and I hope I hear from you soon! And thank you for your writinh because it is very inspiring!

Damien Moore

FINALLY!

Now Tony is running?! Oy vey...she should just hop on a flight to Israel. All this back and forth is for the birds!

Check out Ziva! Whoop whoop