Reviews for Natural Tallent
catspats31 chapter 1 . 7/25/2018
While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Plase remove every detailed description of the physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in the story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is permitted like Archive Of Our Own.
Ellie chapter 2 . 4/22/2015
Lovely story
Arioneway chapter 2 . 12/14/2013
The love scene is incredibly HAWT! Your story is also very vivid. The only thing is that the plot seems quite suddent. In the way that Severus Snape proposed to Hermione after his first time... but that is just my thoughts ob relationships.
Janene1975 chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Wonderful story, your first effort is fantastic... thank you for sharing your work... I truly enjoyed it... :)
tainted-tash chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
Such sweetness! This is definitely going into my Recommended Fics list!
tainted-tash chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Well blow me down with a feather... That was probably the hottest thing I've read between those two... *fans self*
Guest chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
Beautiful story!
TequilaNervous chapter 2 . 9/17/2013
Lovely story!
worrywart chapter 2 . 9/16/2013
A very nice first story. As you continue to write, you'll amaze yourself at what you can create!
SweetTale4u chapter 2 . 9/16/2013
Very good for your first effort. Bravo. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for this couple. Keep up the great work.
angel897 chapter 2 . 9/16/2013
lovely story
angel897 chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
lucky girl
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Awww that was so sweet!
CRMediaGal chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Great start!
BlueHP chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
For a first fic that was really good. I liked it. Keep writing
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