| Reviews for Portrait of a Victor |
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  Guest chapter 29 . 4/8 After all these years, I still love the last lines of this chapter so much! |
 natalieeannee chapter 30 . 4/15/2019 Magnificent story! I've never read or thought of a plot like his... but I LOVE your Peeta from the capital, and how Katniss in this story admits/loves him. Probably the romantic in me, but I did enjoy everything until the reaping the most (probably because they were together, and happy!), but I was glued to read every every part and it was all magnificent! I love this story, and I love how you wrapped it/ended it. Thank you for keeping Finnick alive too! AMAZING writing. I liked how you envisioned Peeta in the Capital too.. very very believable and now this is what I think happened in Cannon. I like the twist you did here, (the softer twist), where Peeta only forgot Katniss. It's bittersweet this twist... but I reeeally like it! It was so sad when Peeta couldn't get on that ship away from the Capital the night the Arena caved in... what phenomenal writing and plot! Thank you for writing and sharing! A joy for us readers. A masterpiece |
| natalieeannee chapter 14 . 4/14/2019 strong ending to this chapter! I really love Katniss in this story! |
| natalieeannee chapter 4 . 4/14/2019 Peeta/Katniss interactions SO Sweet! |
| natalieeannee chapter 5 . 4/14/2019 WOW! this is the most mature Gale/Katniss interaction/resolution I have read! Wonderfully written! |
| natalieeannee chapter 1 . 4/14/2019 WOW! Love this |
| Burnsides-Girl chapter 30 . 12/27/2018 I just finished reading this whole story that I only started a couple days ago and I loved it so much! I have been thinking about it non stop this week and I am so glad that I finished it so quickly. I'm a big fan of your EverLark fics and I have been reading them a lot lately. You have so many good fics, it's hard to pick the next one, but really, this one touched my heart. I cried a lot for these two and I am very grateful for having gotten the chance to read this. Thank you so much for the effort and time you put into this and I am a huge fan of the finished product! |
| salanderjade chapter 30 . 8/26/2018 This story is absolutely wonderful. Probably the best reimagining of the original that's been posted. The characterizations are spot on. The tweaks to canon realistic and in keeping with the story. It's been a while since Ive revisited everlark and this story was the perfect doorway back into their world. You're a gifted writer, my friend. |
| sunshine.katz chapter 30 . 5/27/2018 Peeta's final mantra was perfect. Really enjoyed your rewrite and the different character arcs. |
| sunshine.katz chapter 17 . 5/25/2018 Absolutely loving your version of THG where Peeta isn't a Victor ... and the idea of Haymitch being back in the Arena! |
| Magic Mockingjays chapter 30 . 2/6/2018 Wow. What a wonderful fic! Well done. |
| 2manyfandomstho chapter 30 . 11/18/2017 I'm in tears. Thank you for writing. I cannot even express the bittersweet love I hold in my heart for this story. |
| baldcoder chapter 30 . 10/20/2017 Really great story! Very well done. |
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/26/2017 I have followed this fiction from the beginning and have eagerly awaited seeing it come to an end. The ending slowly built up, hit a crescendo, before lulling back into the love story that originally drew me in. Your grammar and diction makes it easy to follow dialogue and story progress. My only criticism of the fic would be that some scenes were sped up and others moved slowly. It can sometimes be jarring to a reader to have that quick jump with little warning or transition. |
| GoPinkLion chapter 30 . 4/28/2017 Holy freaking cow. That story was amazing! I adored it. And Haymitch in the arena? Perfect! |
