Can't wait to read more. Please update as soon as it is possible for you to do so. :-)

This is a really awesome story. I hope you update soon, I can't wait to read more.

PLEASE update this. Your writing is fantastic!

I love this, I hope you update.

You should continue this! I really want to find out more about Margret.
Anyways, hope to see you soon!
Lots of love,
MusicIsLife2015

Please update! You're writing is amazing and I need this story to continue!

Excellent update soon!

Awesome! I hope she emotes a little more eventually but I love that she is justice! How cool! And she herself seems very cool too! I really REALLY like her as an OC. She might just be one of my favorites!

More!

Again, I'm in awe over this chapter, it's so cool. I love the character so far.

This is such an amazing chapter, it's a work of art.

Back again. All the nicknames you gave to Merritt, were great. I think my favorite was Fedora-Bora. Great second chapter. I like how Margaret was in the background for a bit while Henley, Danny, and Merritt were talking and didn't immediately join in the conversation. I liked the way you described Henley, I'm not sure why, but I liked reading it. I can't get over the way you write from Margaret's POV. It's amazing. I think it's cool how you made her learn magic from textbooks instead of idolizing someone famous. It's a nice different spin. I just noticed how quiet she is, but I'm sure as the story progresses she won't be so afraid of speaking. Are you gonna skip a year, just like in the movie or actually write what happened during? Just wondering. Either way, I'm excited for the next chapter and the rest of the story. Stay awesome :)

Okay, first, I love that she goes by The Mad Hatter. Second, this is a great chapter. The way you write and in her POV is so good, I like it a lot. And her personality too, well, from what I can gather from this first chapter. I also like that you gave her a signature look. I wonder what you're going to write for her now that her tarot card is Justice. Now onto the next chapter. Stay awesome :)

Wow. Just wow. Your writing style is extremely addicting, and your OC is absolutely perfect. She's so funny :).. I really hope you will continue updating this, as I cannot wait for the next part! It's great so far, I'm definitely going to check out any other stories if you have them!

I love it! Please update again soon... I can't wait to read more! :D

xxIrisxx