Delicious. That’s the word for your style of writing. You have a way of keeping me at the edge of my seat despite knowing what is to come. Their relationship is a balanced mess. Codependency at its very core. Never too mushy never too dark. Just at the balance of hurting each other while needing each other. Wonderful piece of writing.

Cheers.

I love your writing style. it's very distinctive, I could pick your work out of a million pieces. the way you write how frantic pitch is very good.

I've read this several times and it's still my favorite

I can not tell you how much I loved this. This was entirely too perfect. The characters, the plot, the tension, the passion, the fear, and the rage.
It was so funny at some points that I had to bite my thumb to keep from laughing, so sweet and fluffy at others that my tooth still aches to this moment, and so tense that the adrenaline rush I got from it almost made me fall down from my chair.
Absolutely brilliant.
You made two disparate characters work so well together that in the end they didn't seem so different after all. I wish I could just stand up and give you a proper ovation.
Though I still keep wondering about the locket Pitch had, I don't mind that I never found out.
Thank you so much for sharing,
E.S~

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

I love it!

Yes! XD Best story ever with them! Fantastic look at their relationship. I hate how some authors make it all fluff when that is clearly not how they'd work.

Four Letter... not words...
Otherwise, it's fine... XD
Just the chapter title... XD

This is also my favorite because I loved the way you showed Jack's desperation and clinging and everything as well as how badly pitch was affected even when Jack recovered but Pitch did not. Above all, I was entralled and this chapter actually made me cry. That's how absolutely amazing this is.

I went to look for my favorite chapter or story thing and I couldn't find one that I liked best because I like them all but there were two I loved and this is one of them.

That was the most beautiful Blackice I have ever read. I don't care if was an unhealthy and angsty relationship. To be honest, I wasn't looking for fluff and happiness anyway.
Thank you for changing my life with a single story. I'm going to go and review my favorite chapter as well and then I'm off.

I absolutely love your fanfic! Are you going to continue it? I think it would be hilarious if they decided to have sex in the closet in ch. 18 and the Guardians were later in getting there

Now that it's over...I feel emoty inside. But I also want to cry. This was so beautiful and sad and amazing. I can only wish it were longer. I've been reading it the past few days and now...I just don't know anymore. Do you think you'll ever make a second part?

There's an ache in my chest...and I don't know if I want to cry (very tempting) or crawl into a hole. I know you said this is complete but do you think you'll ever make a second part? Because that would be awesome. I've been reading this for the past couple days and now that it's over...I feel empty.

so beautiful