I know it's a bit weird to review a story posted so many years ago, but I just found this piece of gold and...
Gosh, I know how it feels to be about 13 years old and trying to be so tough and all, and being SO jealous over someone, when they are having fun with someone else! And you just pretend you're fine with it (like normal people are, because what sane person would be so madly jealous over someone?) and go on. And then one day you are at your breaking point and suddenly just start crying because of it. And of course right in front of that person you don't want to share with anyone else. And then they hug you, comfort you, and then you two joke about it like you usually do.
Oh my god, what a trip back to my teen years, I almost started crying 'cause I felt so bad for Edward... Ahem, what I'm trying to say is: it wasn't as OOC as you think. Thank you and more parental!RoyEd, please? :3

Any story that shows that Ed really is just a 12 year old kid is wonderful in my book. Well done, I applaud you. Warm fuzzies are my favorite.

Ahhhh this is adorable! Yesyesyes, I can see Ed, especially pre-series, being jealous about Al and the Coronel being on more outwardly amicable terms. Great job at depicting this!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
It's 11:30 at night and I'm a mushy melted ball of fluff

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ThIs is SO CUTE?
I swear to god I was not expecrting this but I love it like... A LOT?!

This story was awesome! Ignore the complaints, it seems like a great situation you created here! :)

Who even cares if it was OOC this was absolutely adorable I can't stop smiling thank you for writing it.
I really like the idea of Mustang spending time with Alphonse. Al, IMO, doesn't get enough attention from people outside of Mei Chang and Edward, so it's nice that Roy spends time with him. It makes me happy :)

this is my new fav FMA fanfic! It was so freaking cute!

Noooo, this was sweet and fuffy and father/son and sweet.. I think I said that already. Yay for father/son and emotional hurt/comfort. OOC to that degree is perfectly acceptable when you use age and honest human emotion to break established walls. 5/5 MOOOORE!

I just love RoyEd parental fluff. It's soooo cute

I also don't care if this would be considered as OOC - it's SO F'IN ADORABLE! :3 Thank you for writing/posting this and making it as fluffy and cutesy as possible! :) Much-needed, I assure you.

i wouldnt take this as an ooc moment... not completly anyway its pretty good

I think it was adorable, very well written and a very interesting idea and approach over all

OOC parental fluff is perfectly fine. :3 as long as its not too OOC. But come on, it's so cute and fluffeh and its NOT yaoi. What's not to like?

That was really sad and beautiful. I loved it and that at the end they act like it never happened.