This is cute. Your write well and I'll be checking out more of your fics/original work.

So romantic * - *

You paint an interesting picture of the neighborhood. Never lived in such a place, but can see it from this story. Nice story of meeting for first time. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful story. Made me wonder about life in this kind of neighborhoods in Brooklyn, the Irish & Italian thing, etc. I guess I'll do some research to understand it better. Sounds interesting.
Thanks for the story, Saludos!

This would make a fantastic multi fic

What a sweet coming-of-age story. Kids can't wait to leave home when home is in your heart so you never really leave. Thank you.
Judy

This is the second story I’ve read by you and it’s different every time and I just love it! Just thought I’d let you know haha. I hope you keep writing.

I was hoping for an ending along those lines! Your story made me feel like I was watching an Edward Burns type movie. Sweetly nostalgic.

Ah, so sweet!

Enjoyed, thanks for writing. -t.

cute

Love It!

I absolutely loved it! :)

Awww I loved that. I hope you write a second chapter where they move back married after she graduates.

I really loved it but Bayswater is in Queens yo! Heavy nostalgia...reminded me a little bit of A Guide to Recognizing Your Saints. :)