YAS! THIS IS AMAZING!

This. Was. AWE-SOME. Completely, totally, awesome. I was melting while they were kissing. It was good. Insanely good

woah... mother... this.. was... hot! PHEW! i thought i was gonna burn or something! lol totally hot this was splendid! thanks for sharing!

That was hot but wish Harry was the Uke and Draco the seme

I'm in love with you. Plain and simple, my dear. Pure unadulterated love.

Wow. I like the descriptive way you've written this and the dialogues of both Harry as well as Draco.
'Their wet lips, both from rain and saliva' - the saliva bit slightly ruined the feel of the line.
The conclusion was really well done and I wish there was a follow up to this story set after the war! Well done :)

LOVED this! Absolutely adored it! So sweet and sexy!

Only one thing - in this part:

"Harry's hand under Draco's cloths now moved horizontally, splaying over his upper back before moving downwards, making a wave of heat spread through Draco's body. Draco copied the motion with his free hand, worming under the cloths and immediately sinking his arm up to the elbow inside the heated space."

- you spelled "clothes" as "cloths" twice.

Otherwise, very well done.

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