supper carriers

Trying to buff the SA, shame on you author, shame on you

Not as equals when it comes to matters of the Mantle.

I'm loving it, but I have one it proven that the Prophets were wrong, that humanity's destruction wasn't the will of the gods, and the forerunners were NOT gods, only highly advanced?

Sorry to hear that, but I understand. I do hope you come back to this story in the future.

:( me no like story holds...

Please do not drop this story I've seen so many good mass effect halo crossovers get so far so amazing then it's dropped it saddens me to go this site looks up mass halo crossovers see thousands but search completed and it brings up one shots abandoned stories and maybe find actual complete ones and they just are let downs I've even started reading the one that are abandoned because their good like this and most of the time I don't look for in progress one only complete but on a rare occasion one spikes my interest like this it's like HE'LL YEA SOMEONE KNOWS HOW TO WRITE then to be abandoned its like a slap in the face so I'm just asking not telling or forcing you or threatening you I'm asking you don't let this great story go to waste

Very good, hope to see more.

Next chapter please.

What?

No. Seriously, what the hell just happened?

How the hell did we go from Halo in the last chapter to a completely different cast set in Mass effect with now real explanation or even indication it was happening? Don't get me wrong, i started reading because this was a halo ME xover, but seriously... What?

I'm not even really sure what to make of this at this point. It started out fine but now I'm as confused as a drunk Frenchman reading a Chinese map in New York. I have no idea what's going on... And I'm not even tired yet.

You need to edit the entire chapter so it isn't all in bold, which can be quite jarring to the readers

But then the alliance will get in trouble!

burn the weak

go

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