WHEN ACE SAID LUFFY WAS HAPPY DO YOU LIKE MAKING ME TRIGGERED? IS THAT IT
lmao jokes u are great This story is a blast!

Enjoyed the story?! Enjoyed the story?! How could I possible enjoy that, you monster?! How could you be so cruel?! Are you even human?!

Yes, I enjoyed your story...Monster...

Oh my God. This is messed up. I cried so hard.. I-I don't.*sob* W-What? Just I. T-This is too m-much. *sob* I c-can't believe this.. I-It is just t-too Dark! Just... I-I-I am d-done. *sob*

I am going to throw up.

Oh my God. This is messed up. I cried so hard.. I-I don't.*sob* W-What? Just I. T-This is too m-much. *sob* I c-can't believe this.. I-It is just t-too Dark! Just... I-I-I am d-done. *sob*

...I- don't even know what to say

;n; this is so sad DAMN YOU MAKINO LIKE WHYY ;_; FREAKING DONT HIT MY SMOL BBY iajsjsosasjsojsdkajskdjaksjx

WAIT LOL IS THAT DOFLAMINGO. OMG XDD FABULOUS 11/10 I LUV HIS APPERENCE XD

I think i cried

It was heart warming and sad but a great story at the same time, i love this! Poor luffy and law they must have missed each other so dearly... or course they did otherwise law wouldnt care. Thanks for this story it was really good

Yay! I'm glad Luffy got a happy ending after everything he went through. I really enjoyed this, I hope Ace can become one of Luffy's friends!

I find the pieces of the story coming together nicely and I take back my previous comment.

Its obviously abuse and Law took him in because of that and Ace was oblivious to Luff's suffering. I wanna know how Law got Luffy though.

I think the story starts out great. You have the plot developed and some interesting things that will obviously be revealed as the climax. I really like that the most about stories that I find fascinating.

I love this story! It had a happy end! :D

That sick beeyotch. I hate Makino!