Excellent.
One day, could you write out the outline in the author's note?

Fantastic beginning to a story.

Bravo, I demand a sequel.

Great fic. Love the whump. And the Leon.

Quite sweet! I'm glad I read it. :)

quel talent de narration ! Tu as vraiment le don pour raconter les histoires. C'est à la fois simple mais détaillé. Super.

very nice merlin whump and protective/guilty arthur!

This is a very... touching story. Oh my gosh... when Arthur thought Merlin was dead... that scared me to death! You write very well.

Hello! I wanted to say that you have a beautiful writing style! Great story and wonderful focus on the characters and their relationships. Good job!

Amazing story! It touched my heart. :)

Great

this was fantastic! loved the bromance and arthurs realisation of merlin doing something, merlin truly deserves it! i also like your wee rushed A/N at the end to sort of sum things up- im glad merlin walked again:) anyways, i loved this, cant wait for more from you!:)

Very nice! I loved the ending! Great bromance talk as Merlin adjusts to the 'new normal'. (dreadful, sad phrase)

I love this! There is a chapter three ahead, which I have not read! Is Merlin dead, or will he live? I can say, truly, in this moment, your writing is so skillful, that I can accept either outcome!

Very moving! I liked Arthur;s thought process as he looks at the body. Trying to recognize, and at the same time , not recognize his friend. Your description was vivid. Well done!