seth/oc... hmm... i dunno... the story itself is good but your habit of pairing your peeps with canon ones grinds my gears a bit

no matter. some legitimate criticism- the plot seemed to go by a bit too fast. i mean one second they're introducing themselves and the next they're laughing, talking, and sharing numbers. seems a bit too convenient, especially for bianca. actually that kind of ties into my relative dislike of your oc which is weird