Reviews for The Long Game
Sister Mary chapter 7 . 5/26/2019
Hi! I do want to comment on how much I am enjoying your story. I have read many of the fan fiction stories about Piper and Alex, many with 3rd. grade grammar (I'm a HS English Teacher), though with some good ideas. I love the way yours are planned, logical and absolutely intriguing! Can't stop reading! I love that this and the Mideval story also have the "smut", but it fits and isn't overdone. I, too, kind of wish Vauseman were for real, but do understand that OITNB is one of those tales that truly can affect us all in so many ways. Anyway, you obviously have some talent and maturity on your side. Thank you so much for the fun read!
rj83 chapter 22 . 11/4/2018
Just reread this story! I love how different it is while still keeping with the main setting of the show. Great work and I hope you come back and write either a sequel or more like it!
Laylor chapter 9 . 10/8/2018
really enjoying your story although very anxious about the nasty new cube mate, just when our girls were happy.
s.sachs chapter 22 . 8/15/2018
one of the best Vauseman fanfic stories ive ever read! please write something new!
guest chapter 22 . 1/25/2018
It is great! Enjoyed reading it a lot. Thank you for writing it.
calienur chapter 22 . 4/23/2017
I've only just found this fic, and read it all in one day. It's really well-written and the plot was excellent. Great job!
WB79 chapter 22 . 11/9/2015
Just finished binge reading your story, and all I can say is.. WOW.
Some serious plottwists you have made, very well thought out and written. Thank you!
RJVause chapter 22 . 9/1/2015
Read all of this todayloved itwell written and great story linesthank you!
Guest chapter 22 . 8/20/2015
This is an amazing story, i loved it
ArV chapter 22 . 7/22/2015
Awww I loved how this story ended... well I loved all of it. Great job, I will continue to read your other stories.
Sue chapter 22 . 7/15/2015
Read all of this today & really enjoyed your writing!
w4nderer chapter 22 . 5/11/2015
Ahhhhhhhh this was such an amazing story and plot! Loved it! It kept me on suspense and on edge! Loved how Fig and Healy all got their desserts. Great job!
Disney02829 chapter 22 . 4/30/2015
Really great story! So much happening I couldn't stop reading. Just awesome! I hope you will consider writing more stories in this forum in the future.
nickyjg chapter 22 . 3/25/2015
Just re-read this story and I think it's even better on 2nd time reading!
guest chapter 22 . 1/4/2015
This was so good! Alex is a genius. The story read like a bond movie or something. Really really good!
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