| Reviews for Friday the 13th |
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Vitaliciouscreations chapter 1 . 11/14/2013 A comet is a dirt snowball? It's actually a piece of asteroid or space rock that has broke off and collected enough velocity to create enough friction to get flames on the front. Oh wait, that was a joke? *facepalm* This was nice, it's good to see Danny having a good day. |
Inviso-Al chapter 1 . 9/14/2013 It would be pretty funny if someone DID get his journal! |
Helper chapter 1 . 9/14/2013 I have just a couple small critiques for you, if you'd allow me. When I read this piece, the tone was a little off. I think that if you used a little less exclamation marks, then it might sound a bit better. The summery was a bit confusing, and it's energy that can not be created or destroyed, not matter. It's a great idea, and a good piece, but next time maybe try a little more imagry. The whole thing seems a little rushed. I don't mean any of this in a bad way, I'm just trying to help. You can completely ignore this for all I care. Just... keep it in mind for your next fic. |
MsFrizzle chapter 1 . 9/15/2013 I'm glad to see that the trio had a good day. I completely missed it that Friday was the 13th. I did have a bit of a flash-back when reading this because I remember taking over part of a class for a substitute once - it was astronomy. |
malphigus chapter 1 . 9/14/2013 Heheheh. This is a good style! :D Nothing happened in particular for me yesterday xD |