Reviews for Happy Endings |
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sailorpriestess chapter 2 . 6/9/2014 I always enjoy reading stories that are in darkens point of view. Its an interesting beginning looking forward to chapter 3 |
bluebutterfly2006 chapter 1 . 12/12/2013 I love it please keep writting on this :-) |
asdfghjklalala chapter 2 . 9/24/2013 Can't wait for the next one! :) |
Bouowmx chapter 2 . 9/20/2013 I think Serena's clumsiness is overly flanderized. Flanderization is taking one trait of character, exaggerating it until it completely consumes the character (definition from TvTropes). Although Serena has the characterization of being caring, as evidenced of the visits of the hospitals and the patients, that is overtaken by her clumsiness. Please characterize Serena as a more balanced person. Otherwise, the romance bits are fine. It could use a bit more work to flow better and to sound more realistic (not to push too much on the willing suspension of disbelief). |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/20/2013 its so cute! And funny too! Please update and send in the next chapter soon! |
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 2 . 9/21/2013 Keep it coming. |
KristalFlare chapter 2 . 9/21/2013 Aw, so cute. |
Thegorgeousempress chapter 2 . 9/21/2013 I did find this humorous,so lousy it may not be. I liked that you put enough of a good timeline for things in the story,the stories I read all go too fast for my liking. I hope you update soon. |
sailormoon0630 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013 I enjoyed reading this story can't wait for more:) |
MoonGoddessMagic chapter 2 . 9/21/2013 wonderful story |
JFVM chapter 2 . 9/21/2013 oh wow keep going |
Mistress Mask chapter 2 . 9/20/2013 i think your story is cute. i love it so far. im smiling while reading it. I hope you add more chapters soon. |
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 1 . 9/14/2013 Great. |
lovi425 chapter 1 . 9/13/2013 Wonderful start! It seems like a cute and sweet story :) I can't wait for the next installment! |
Light Penguin chapter 1 . 9/13/2013 Oh, my goodness! This is such a cute little story, and I'm really looking forward to reading more :D |