Love seeing Lucy suffer! Looking forward to more

Oh dear god I want to punch Naruto so much right now. He clearly forgot the concept of trust when he talked to Lucy.

Hmm I really want this to go a little au and for naruto to get a kick in his head.
Actions have consequences!

omg! everything is moving forward! I really got angry at Naruto this chapter but then again he is just a teenage boy - a ninja- but still basically a child. I hope that Lucy can hold on just a bit more. And I knew that Ryo was up to something! I think however, based on his reaction that he might actually have developed affection/friendship for Lucy. Don't worry Lucy! Your Knight In Shining Armor is on his way! I got so excited to see that Itachi made the decision to get her out of there! weeeeeeeee! Im at the edge of my seat! Whats going to happen next?! Cant wait for the next chapter!

Poor Lucy! Its like her life doesn't matter to anyone, I feel so bad for her! Also loving the story!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

Nice

thank you very much for the update :)

i am screaming! aaahhhh this chapter gave me lots of feels, and i realised that i needed to take the whole day as a breather, because i am shooketh! okay, firstly, i got secondhand embarrassment for lucy when kiba was able to smell her on ryo, and i was just hiding my face from the screen because aaahhhh i can't! imagine if your friend (who's living in quite a conservative place) finds out you're having casual sexual relations with some random person. i would literally not show my face to them ever again! loving how lucy played danzo though. danzo may have been trying to pull the strings, but lucy definitely still has the upperhand on him. thank goodness for canon plot knowledge! i can't wait for sasuke to destroy danzo, or if they even reached sasuke when he was fighting with danzo, i just want itachi and lucy to destroy danzo, too! he's such a despicable and greedy man! as for ryo, I FREAKING KNEW IT! i knew that he's spying for danzo and like lucy, i am so angry at him! i'm so angry that lucy trusted him, and that part where lucy was hurting him with her words? freaking satisfying! asdfghjlkjhg i know this is fiction, but betraying someone who trusts you? that's just the lowest of low, and i hope lucy doesn't give in and forgive ryo because what he did was really bad. i mean, what if lucy wasn't careful and blurted out an important information to ryo? then everything she had worked for could have been destroyed! i'm so angry (at him)! though i kind of want to tell lucy 'i told you so' too for giving in to ryo's advances *sweatdrops* as for naruto, i know he's hurting and all that, but never have i ever wanted to pummel his face so much until i read this chapter! i literally wanted to give him a black eye on top of his black eye, and i was so satisfied when lucy was like "you said i would be safe in konoha yet here we are". he really needs to think before he speaks. but then again, if you've seen naruto as hokage, he seems to be just all talk and no action :\ so i'm not surprised. can't wait for when he apologises to lucy asdfghjkjhgf gosh i'm so annoyed at him hahahaha! as for kakashi, he's so cool-headed and i just- i simp for him. good on lucy for having a good taste and having kakashi as her favourite character. at least we have someone here that supports and believes in her. as for itachi's part, you're absolutely right! i LOVE it! i'm screaming because even though he really wants to go after sasuke when he went after danzo, he still trusted lucy and what she told him and chose to go to konoha to try and rescue her! i think i just melted like goo because lucy is finally getting the good stuff she deserves after all the crap she's been put through in konoha. aaahhh i can see that itachi cares for her, and i literally can't wait for them to finally get together. will itachi be like bursting in the temple or something like some knight in shining armour to rescue lucy from her impending wedding to kinoto? because that would just be so hilarious and fairytale-like (aka shrek interrupting fiona's wedding) at the same time, and when all is well, i think lucy would find it funny if that happened. i can't imagine what kakashi and company's reaction would be though when they find out that itachi's alive. it's going to be so crazy, and i am simply here for it! aaahh you're making me super excited and i legit can't wait for the next chapter! as for lucy's anger, i wonder when all of that will culminate and what will be the consequence. i mean, i understand that after all the trauma she's experienced, one day, it's all going to come out at the same time, and that time seems to be really soon. after having been tortured, beaten, and her trust betrayed multiple times, i'm surprised she hasn't broken down and just abandoned everyone in konoha (but then if she did, then we won't have any story to tell lol). anyway, i'm so so so giddy to read the next part! thank you so much for this chapter! i enjoyed reading it even if it messed with my emotions for the day hahahaha *hearts*

So much angst in this chapter. I'm hoping Lucy just snaps and stops taking everyones bullshit. I'm soo very frustrated for her lmao. Kill someone Lucy! KILL!

This chapter was brilliant (as always)! I love the emotions and the development with the OC Lucy. Thank you so much for the update. I can’t wait for KING Itachi to return to Konoha. Omg I’m soo excited for the next chapter!

Love this so Much! Keep up the good work.

Oh here I wish that Itachi will crash the five kage summit lol

Im loving this nad im loving more now that the chapter will be more of sasuke and itachi and Lucy. Hope itachi rescues her

Can't wait for more updates on this amazing