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Re-readint and finally reviewing. Love the idea. It's a bit fact paced but still great. Write on!

awesome story

I would really like to see a continuation of this... the pregnant husband part, that would be a sight to see, especially if you add in the mood swings. lol how will old voldy react? and Lucius trying to get on Harry?

edit: "your current error" ...'should be added'
1. across Harry's naked "falt" stomach..you meant flat?
2. "tho" we need to have 'a' proper bonding...you meant although?
...there are other punctuation/grammar problems, sorry, I'm to lazy to type it out :D

SEQUEL? PLEASE? come on, there is so much potential to this story!

good story

Ok, that was fast.
Nice idea. Maybe the next time you could let the development be a Little bit slower, because now its kind of unbelievable, because Harry was fighting for years against him and now within minutes he give everything up? Doesnt Sound that realistic.
But nevertheless was it nice to read.
go on like this.
greetings ShadowFire :)

write more, it's a good story.

Awesome! ))

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I like the idea of your stories but you need to slow down a reread them a few time to remove the kinks. There are to many spelling and grammar mistakes for your story to be read correctly.

awwww, are you sure its complete?
HRS

wow... that was hot? lol really it was! jajaja thanks for sharing this its marvelous!

I like it!

well i cant believe you left it like that! there could have been more but its not my story so yeah but still could have been more!

this was really interesting. I'd love to see you explore what would happen when Harry's friends find out that he is married to Tom; even more so what Tom would do when he meet them and not have to kill them (Unless Harry forgot to put them on that list) hehehehehe.