| Reviews for Shadow of a Doubt |
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mariroxo.nassur chapter 9 . 7/9 That's the most accurate description of gatorade I've ever seen haha |
Detsella Morningdew chapter 65 . 6/21 This story (well, I consider the first story just a part of this one) is just... great. The best realistic interpretation of Danny Phantom without getting tone problems. It would have been a lot worse if I had to read chapter-by-chapter instead of all at once, but as is, there is enough levity and enough gravity to make it both enjoyable and impactful, and realistic enough to really "believe it happened." This is one of the few fics that I don't just read it once and set aside. This one I'm keeping as an ebook to read later. |
hallowedgrounds chapter 65 . 5/31 This was amazing! Thank you for all your hard work! |
Summer Lime chapter 7 . 5/6 This story is really interesting and well-developed. Danny's guilt and refusal to talk is understandable, if frustrating. Maddie's insistence that it's all a coincidence reminds me of a quote.. "[...] half of the “rational” explanations you give are actually more far-fetched than just accepting it was a, a ghost or something." It doesn't fit perfectly, but her rational does seem to just be her grasping at straws because she's scared, even to the point where Ocham's razor would suggest Danny Phantom really is the simplest answer. Just like the character that quote refers to. Sorry if this is weird, j Just.. I really like this, and when I like something I pick it apart and analyze it to death. |
ayzbraiker chapter 65 . 4/29 AJSBSKSUHAN GEEEEZ OKAY. this. dang. I have a lot to say. first of all WHAT A RIDE! I really wish I let it stretch out for longer (and not have read it in less than three days hahah). this- this felt s l. my chest was clenching constantly. so many times did I have to just look away from you words. Put it down to take a breath. So many times did I want them to stop everything and jus it out. but I knew Danny couldn't just do that. At points, it really felt hopeless. I thought Danny could never go back, but at the same time, I knew how wrong that would've felt. They needed time and they needed space, but they als each other. but gosh, I love Shannon, she's a queen. Such an inspiring kind character. I am so glad she and Danny stumbled in on each other. I wouldn't have liked it any other way. And actually, my favorite part of this book was when Shannon was performing therapy on Danny's hand and they were cracking corny jokes. it was such a tender moment, and it's an important moment in their relationship. I also loved how Patrik went from the cynical and untrusting doctor to their weird uncle that bunks with them. Danny's family grew, he's grown. he's happy and he feels loved. his life will never be normal, but he's home. I thank you for this, and I'm sending love |
ayzbraiker chapter 1 . 4/27 oh dang oh dang oh dang. I binge read the first part which had 20 or so chapters. this? *THIS?!* OHHOHOHOH |
Jamalymal chapter 65 . 4/24 Amazing read over the last couple of days |
alexandrathorn chapter 1 . 4/24 omg my prayers have been answered. can't wait to read! |
Henry chapter 65 . 4/20 Second time reading this, and it never loses its intensity. Finished it in four days; couldn't put it down. You have real talent. Thank you for your work |
Kiara.Queen.of.Kaos chapter 65 . 4/20 Ok so Wow this was a ride. Sorry for the lurker like behaviour but I was binging this like crazy and just wow. This story was an intense emotion filled experience from the start of the first one to this I've been on the edge of my seat and couldn't really put this down so to speak. Iv'e got tabs open with chapter updates from alerts on other stories and a backlog of youtube videos and livestreems. The last Three days all my spare time has gone in to this fic I found from a Fan Art on pintrest. I was turned of at first by the fact that it was on since for the most part I don't read on here any more but as soon as I started the first paragraph I was hooked. Your OCs are well made and seamlessly fit into your story in a way that is rare and needed, and really enjoyable to read. P.S Yeah so that time the channels were changing between paragraphs, How much of a kick did you get writing that Clone Sister line? |
ArriatheDragon chapter 39 . 4/13 "Hey, you're not see yet!" "Shows what you know" Asdfghjk THIS CHILD |
ArriatheDragon chapter 32 . 4/11 Angels is best mum |
ArriatheDragon chapter 34 . 4/3 If you read all the chapter titles together they sound like some sort of carefully crafted poem |
Jaricchi chapter 65 . 4/3 Absolutely amazing! This is great! |
Clara Brighet chapter 63 . 4/1 So sometimes, when I have a lot to say in a review, I'll type it in my notes app instead of directly into the site so I can make comments as I go without risking spoilers. Apparently I did that when this chapter first went up (I can tell by the date) but never posted it? Shame on me. Also - I did finally get my sister Nerdalier to read both Phantom of Truth and Shadow of a Doubt. She adores them and we regularly refer to scenes from your stuff when explaining what we want to do with a scene we're workshopping together. You've done some amazing work here. Without further ado, the (very) belated review! - MY WHOLE DAY JUST GOT SO MUCH BETTER Wow, you always pick the greatest quotes for your chapter headings. How do you find those? Ooops…. methinks that’s a typo? “…bundled in sweaters, hands in their leaves had turned the gutters…” The two separate sentences I THINK you were going for have terrific imagery, though. ;) I literally only point this out because if you ever decided to have this printed, even just for yourself, I would gladly volunteer to comb for the few existing typos. I may have already begun such a project because I love this story that much... And Mrs. Foley has the magical mom superpower of being able to draw people out so much better than their children… that’s certainly true of my mom anyway. Yes. Yes oh my gosh yes. It’s so strange, not being able to see the physical evidence of the hurt you know is there. THAT’S PERFECT omigoodness how did they find him? Bless this pun-loving therapist, that’s exactly what Danny needs. One more typo: “The GIW wouldn’t just forget about Phantom, but at least now they didn’t have a record [of of] his every twitch” “How is it home if you’re not here?” I SHIP IT SO HARD - That's it for what I had in my notes app. I'll have to reserve time at some point to come give this story all the reviews it deserves. Thank you! |