Reviews for The Flaw in the Plan
JustReadIt chapter 1 . 6/29
I don't mean to be rude or anything, but this story was really fast forward and it seems unrealistic to me.
I'm not usually the one to spread negativity around, but this story made a little uncomfortable.
But, as a writer myself, critic is always welcome (atleast to me).
I hope this review doesn't bother you and that you're doing well.
Hugs and Cuddles for You 3
Coolfire30 chapter 1 . 4/26
Oh god...
yukixyuri13 chapter 1 . 3/16
Awww! I loved this! I wish there was more
PinkMusicalCherry chapter 1 . 2/18
The quick turnaround from enemy to love was a little too quick for me, but you know, everyone has their cup of tea!
Danny Phantom's Lover chapter 1 . 11/9/2019
Not all flaws hinder what is to happen to those that fate/destiny has set its eyes upon.
Birnan Midniht chapter 1 . 10/17/2019
manipulative!Dumbledore isnt just turning in his grave, he's on a bloody rotissery
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2019
Delightful.
BabiiGiirl22 chapter 1 . 6/25/2019
Beautiful.
582Raven chapter 1 . 3/28/2019
Adorable fluffiness
ladyofsilverdawn chapter 1 . 3/8/2019
So Perfect!
Akiramatirkezsanab chapter 1 . 3/5/2019
Twoje historie są niesamowite
muttjc2003 chapter 1 . 1/2/2019
Sweet, adorable, fluffiness. Loved it! :)
acetwolf94 chapter 1 . 12/6/2018
I LOVE IT! Will you add more?
mayawene chapter 1 . 10/23/2018
Thanks
Arabella Hollows chapter 1 . 10/16/2018
I've never shipped the Dark Lord and Harry before, but I must say, the quality of this writing has made me see their relationship in a new light. I could never have come up with the deep concepts that this short story brings to the table and it gives Voldemort a new touch of humanity, which I do believe he lacked in most of the movies/books. Props to you Paimpont for creating fanfiction that deeply moved me.
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