Reviews for Kids
cosmictrap chapter 28 . 12/3/2019
ok. i forgive you for killing everyone lmaooooooo. this epilogue was everything, and perfect! i was craving for a glimpse of the future though, a little insight into sam x lilly and senna x igneel etc, you know? but i am happy... when all the kids died i was not happy about choosing to read this fic but i love it now. thank you for this! xoxo
cosmictrap chapter 24 . 12/3/2019
honestly... i knew people would die but i have to say that while i love everything about this fic, i feel like... not so many of the kids had to die. a couple of them, yes... i mean duh i get it, with the poetic justice, full circle of it all but idk... it's left me so restless that they ALL died... i dunno ugh. i am so disturbed by it ( not that you chose to depict the deaths of course, just that they all had to die )
imaoola chapter 5 . 6/4/2019
i can't find the link to the music
jellysbean chapter 28 . 3/30/2019
THE BEST OF THE BEST. But may I ask author, I thought the keeper made it clear that no one may pass the time gate again. Care to explain why Future Igneel showed up. Made my headache. Still, this was great and a hell of a ride. Countless of sleepless nights yet it was worth it. Good job author
flamingheart12 chapter 28 . 11/2/2018
I am so happy with the way the story went. You did well. Your fight scenes were really good and the story was just awesome all in all. Nine out of Ten. ( the one is a combination of every time I cried) XD
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2017
And just so you know make the kids from the Futures back story is a little different then the ones about their all of their parents being killed and the town was destroyed and that there was no evil group
Guest chapter 28 . 12/6/2017
Hey just so you know I love your book but could you rewrite another one just like this one except make it different sent the kids way back to when their parents were just starting to get used to Fairy Tail and bring mira's kids in it as well along with elfman and Evergreens Kid two in the shows the movies and the comics because I'm sure your fans would appreciate it and me too I'm sure you'll come up with something for the title let us know when you made the story
honeybadger894 chapter 27 . 11/27/2017
They’ll be reborn eventually, and luckily the psychopaths that killled the world won’t be around that time around
honeybadger894 chapter 24 . 11/27/2017
I take back my take back about the loop
honeybadger894 chapter 20 . 11/27/2017
Never mind that endless loop idea I had last chapter.
honeybadger894 chapter 18 . 11/27/2017
Oh... so, Saito will give the dragon skin to Gajeel, then die, but the dragon skin will be passed onto the not yet born Saito, who will eventually give it to Gajeel after traveling back in time, making an endless cycle
Leina the fan chapter 8 . 11/14/2017
I like how you put "The fire mage casted one last worried glance over his shoulder at the mage who was his son before closing the door." instead of "...over his shoulder at his son..." because Igneel is Natsu's son, but kind of not Natsu's son at the same time. If you didn't actually mean to do that, you don't have to say anything...just take the compliment...and keep it forever...it's your compliment now... Okay, I became weird quickly in that review. Don't worry, I'm actually sane
FairyTailLover chapter 22 . 8/28/2017
My,That explains ALOT.
FairyTailLover chapter 19 . 8/28/2017
This is the best Fan fiction I've ever read(And that's saying alot)
Cheschire-Kaat chapter 28 . 8/18/2017
BEAUTIFUL ENDING. 11/10. LOVED

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