| Reviews for Magical Force |
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   andjelija.nenic chapter 2 . 1/9/2019 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/21/2017 Really hoping the story will be continued |
| Tsamoka chapter 4 . 10/31/2014 Revan should have killed Dumb-old-dork then and there. Honestly, who the F*ck leaves a kid in a place like like and says "it's for the best." ? Somebody who deserves to have their testicles removed with boiling acid, apparently. PLEASE tell me that Revan is going to go on a well deserved justice-delivering murder-spree very soon! |
| Sitruc NoMan chapter 4 . 8/21/2014 Interesting can't wait for updates! |
| Mercuris chapter 4 . 8/14/2014 looking good. Just wondering, are you going to fem slash Reven and Sam? hope you update soon. |
| enji-benjy chapter 4 . 7/20/2014 The scenes from the SW-verse only make sense if you plan on Harriet & Reven returning to it at some point, but with what you have been doing with the HP-verse it is clearly going to be a very long time before they do, even if they work out how to jump back into that dimension. Also, how old is Harriet here, you say four but you also said that Voldemort was defeated four years ago, meaning she probably wasn't born at the time... I thought HK left the Star Forge to kill admiral Karath? |
| enji-benjy chapter 2 . 7/20/2014 What made her think it was an alternate dimension/reality and not just a pre-spaceflight planet? Is Revan a he or a she, you keep switching genders. I can understand other people getting it wrong, but even when you are writing Revan's point of view she seemingly refers to herself as 'he'. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/17/2014 Can't wait for the next chapter |
| OSR fanatic chapter 4 . 5/17/2014 Great Story! :) Update Soon! :) |
| Elle chapter 4 . 5/10/2014 So this was chapter was just retarded. Revan responds to Dumbledore threatening to hunt her down by just giving in? So much for her being Darth fucking Revan. Should have marked this as a My Little Pony crossover rather than Star Wars. |
| Elle chapter 2 . 5/9/2014 You referred to Revan as both male and female in the first section, which was from Revan's POV. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/31/2014 I can't wait for the next chapter |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 4 . 3/31/2014 Revan better watch what is done to Harriett or she may find herself having to care for someone brainwashed or magically bound. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/30/2014 Great story please continue |
| Darth Zanitos chapter 4 . 3/28/2014 good story but with less time between the updates would be nice thank |
