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jeyelsee chapter 1 . 7/22 Just dropping by here to reread this again while you do the revisions. Hope you are well. I'll be waiting! |
Dexaf chapter 21 . 7/17 i see you are working to revision this story and for the good experience to read. i can say that this is a great story with a connected feeling between those two and it's good, I hope u can see the next chapter. good job |
itsspecialtome chapter 21 . 7/6 This is my first time reviewing. I have to say, I've read lots of Naruto fanfictions so far, and this one has to be at the top of them. Your writing is so awesome, it pushed me to go and click on the review button (a first for me). Here's some attributes where I indulge in your awesomeness: your writing style and wording; your depiction of each characters personality, whose differing thought processes are clear in the narration; your super creative plot; your characters' development... the fact that you're a no go for sasusaku and all for sasuhina! (Д))彡 I especially enjoy reading Shinobi-kun's (sorry Sasuke) and Hinata's conversations. All the topics they talk about are so well sequenced and relevant in showing just how much they are opening up to each other, I think. Oh that reminds me... you had said romance scene were not your forte?! They're so satisfying though. ( ꁞ ) On that topic, I am curious if Naruto holds any feelings for Hinata? Some of his reactions seemed to be hinting to that but I'm not sure. Of course, for my part, that would be welcome (I guess I get some sort of vengeful dark enjoyment from seeing Naruto suffer a little from a one sided crush towards Hinata for a turn). I'm not sure if you'll read this and if you're still active with this story (because the last chapter was published in 2017) so all I can do is humbly kneel down and plead for your skilful fingers and brain cells to post more godly content. \(゚ー゚\) |
neverkarma chapter 1 . 6/24 Dear Fher34, yes, you deserve a review and so much more. You rightfully attracted 1K worth of readers and favorites with the sorcery of your words. I am posting this review in Ch.1 because does not allow you to post two reviews on the same chapter. I read all of the 21 chapters in a single seating, and you will have no idea of what kind of emotional rollercoaster you have put me through. I was thrilled to read Hinata's emotions that were depicted so realistically yet beautifully and the progression of Sasuhina's relationship. So thrilled. The beauty of the imagery of the mindscapes, the character's statements about pain, trauma, the numbing pain, the desperate hurt, guilt-they all deluged me with emotions. The experience of reading your story was powerful. I was thoroughly overwhelmed. Just the description of Neji, Kiba, Shino, Hanabi, Hiashi, Tsunade, Mei and all the characters you conjured with the magic of your words and your elegant, steady pace made my heart well with emotions. For a moment, I wanted to sit down and just cry. And you coming back to revise told me that it wasn't just talent but you had incredible passion in the craft you do. I keep coming back to the chapters, and wondering, 'how is this writer able to achieve such psychological descriptions, with poise, restraint, and steady pace?' You also managed to sprinkle it with some funny, uplifting scenes that further show the emotional intimacy between Sasuhina. So beautifully done. I don't recall many times I was so moved by the characters' relationships in a story. Probably with Kenshin and Tomoe in Samurai X: Trust and Betrayal. And reading this story really hounded me with similar sentiments of grief and uplifting sense of hope and yearning. Your writing is so beautiful, and quite frankly, I became very jealous of what you achieved. I thought I was doing my best at writing, but I learned so much from you, especially that taking time with progression and building up emotions and relationships is no joke. The anguish, emotional turmoil I felt at the characters' trials, the hope I felt as Hinata tried to stand up, and the giddy, grinning temperament I find myself at sasuhina moments-all of them were unforgettable. I am strongly considering rehashing my story too, completely top to bottom, since I read your story. I really care for my humble writing no matter how mediocre it might be, and I thank you for your contribution. You truly motivate writers like me to push beyond boundaries instead of just pumping out chapters for the sake of the story to progress. You take time to steadily progress to the arc you desired. That is what I truly admire about you. Like other readers said, I feel so privileged to read this story. Petty envy and jealousy aside, I really admire you and your work. You rightfully deserve all the praises. I wish I could write as you, and it is amazing that you achieved all this, being bilingual. I truly admire your work, passion, and grace. Thank you so much. You won't know how much your story means to me. |
neverkarma chapter 20 . 6/24 Thank you for this story. I hope you get as many reviews and feedbacks you deserve. The sasuhina interactions were just so sweet. I hope them pure happiness. My heart broke everytime Hinata’s traumatic experiences were evoked. Rape is truly a horrible experience that nobody should go through. Aww the pain my hearts hurt is going through islike no other. |
neverkarma chapter 21 . 6/24 My heart breaks for the characters. Hinata is just so strong...The beauty of her strength shines, and I feel like crying. Thank you for this story. Please update as soon as you can! |
jeyelsee chapter 21 . 6/21 For real?! I'm just so happy you came back and are working on this story again somehow. This work of yours really got me hooked. I'll be looking forward to reading this again from the top once the revisions are done. Thank you! |
stefu0817 chapter 21 . 6/9 Pls finished the story I love it |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27 Please Update! I would love to read more. This story is superb! |
WooisLegit chapter 21 . 5/26 Granted it's been a year since you've revised I assume you've abandoned this story. Regardless, I just wanted to say that this is one of the best SasuHina fanfics I've ever read and thank you for writing it. If you ever decide to continue this story I'll be waiting to read it and can't wait to find out what happens next :) |
OneTwoThreeFour1234 chapter 21 . 5/15 Uuughhhh I love your story so much! I favorited it a while ago(like several years lol). I’m so glad I waited because now I can just binge read it again! Your ideas are so amazingly original that I can’t wait to see where this story goes. Keep up the good writing, and I hope you and your fam are healthy and well! |
xueryukii chapter 21 . 4/26 before i started reading this, i was like "what. 21 chps? that's so long" (only because im not the type to keep reading without losing focus)... but now, im like "why so short? when will it ever continue, the updates i mean" just wanted to say that, i absolutely love your story. for one, you have a great plot which is not only interesting but also isnt awkwardly out of place. secondly, it would have to be the way you managed to keep all the characters, well, in character... it had certainly made the story even better than it already is! also, i totally dont regret spending whatever spare time i have, as well as sacrificing my sleep, just so i could finish reading this story (up till the point you updated of course) so thank you so very much, for writing this story and also for giving me the pleasure of reading it! 3 |
vogue.provins chapter 21 . 4/4 I love your sorry. I hope you can still go back and finish it. |
jeyelsee chapter 21 . 4/4 Wow I love this. This story is definitely an amazing work of art. It has depth. It goes into detail of every feeling, every thought of a person who has suffered and has fallen into so much grief and pain. I just can't fully express how much I admire your work. Hats off to you! And I'm really hoping you'd update soon. Please. |
KweenSprinkle chapter 21 . 2/19 Uhm, wow. Read everything on a day and just wanted to say that I loved this fic. I loved how slow paced the relationship between Hinata and Sasuke was. And I loved how you wrote Sasuke. You did a great job and I can’t wait to see more if you ever decide to write more. Thank you for sharing it with us ! |