Reviews for Children of Nemesis
Some guy 161 chapter 3 . 5/3
I hope you pick this story back up now that you're finished with Transcendent Humanity. I really think that this story has the potential to be just as big, if not bigger!
marduk-report chapter 3 . 3/30
I can across this after reading the last chapter of Transcendent Humanity and I've really enjoyed it. I like first contact stories as a rule.

It's a nice short thing, but if you do write any more of it I'd certainly read it. :)
Regrettable Pun chapter 3 . 3/2
This story is amazing. I thought I liked Trancendant Humanity a lot, but this one I feel has infinitely more potential. I love the concept, the writing is great, the pace is perfect, the characters are good, etc.. I wish it was still going, though I understand the things that can happen with writing a story.
random-adam chapter 3 . 2/17
I come back and re-read this once or twice a year and each time I marvel at the worlds you've created. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Jim chapter 3 . 2/9
I really like this story. Very original. A fantastic job showing how a translation matrix actually learns. The black hole is genius. The solution even better. My favorite part is your breakdown of the science used. Definitely looking forward to more.
Hadrian.Caeser chapter 3 . 6/22/2019
Love it
jsbelanger chapter 3 . 4/13/2019
Aw man. You stopped just as things were getting going. You really should finish this. Awesome concept and great execution for as much fleshed out as there is of it.
Some guy 161 chapter 3 . 12/19/2018
I doubt this will ever be updated, but it would absolutely make my day if it was.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/18/2018
Why did you stop on such a fascinating story?! I would love to see this finished!
Ilireanwri chapter 3 . 6/16/2018
This story is very good. Please continue it.
LordNemo chapter 3 . 4/8/2018
Love this story, very interesting.
ShadowCub chapter 3 . 4/7/2018
So become a race of slaves...uh no.
BridgeBurn100 chapter 3 . 4/4/2018
Wow this is down right amazing! Really hope you come back to it!
HyperionATLAS chapter 3 . 11/22/2017
dammit this soo friggin good too why stop it?
Marquis Joy chapter 3 . 9/27/2017
F to pay respects
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