Reviews for Princess Pals
devilsama666 chapter 8 . 7/28/2019
This is an awesome fanfiction, I enjoyed each chapter and can't wait for more. Your characterisation of each characters( particularly Diaspro and Krystal, Stella too) is amazing. I normally have no interest in winx but your take on it and your writing style are really good. So great job, keep it up.
Lazyass out.
CryingWithTheWolves chapter 7 . 1/13/2019
All I can say is, this fic is absolutely amazing!
I can't believe you not only shed light on the Enchantix situation, Diaspro's motives and Roxy's struggles to transform as well! I see here that you made Roxy get her Believix on earth but had to start over in Alfea, and it totally made sense. The trauma of Galatea's near wing-loss was creative and her personality is something I can learn to love! That and Nova's pride for Stella, I've always thought Nova would somewhat resent Stella for being a pain in the ass, but it seems you made her such a nice person!
This CU fanfic is incredible, it is interesting and down-to-earth, actually delving into the more "normal" lives of the fairies at Alfea, which in your story is so humorous and fun!
Although I know you might not meant to, I think these girls can definitely form another "club", though I know Diaspro would hate that xD. I can definitely see these girls there for each other as they face everyday problems and go on exciting adventures!
Also, some questions. Why does Nova avoid King Radius, and Galatea's stepfather's identity will be very much appreciated if you can explain it. Thank you!
Well, that's all I have to say for now, but I sure will peel my eyes out for updates! You are such an awesome writer!
-Brella4ever
zeynel chapter 8 . 2/9/2015
Sounds interesting, I'm curious about what happen next!
Cheyla chapter 8 . 8/20/2014
I love your writing style. It flows easily and I can see what's happening in my mind, something that I don't find too often. Keep up the good work!
LuminaDelacour chapter 8 . 10/29/2013
Wonderful chapter. I really liked the fact that the other fairies from Alfea took part in helping everyone. Krystal's fairy form is really pretty. Once again, wonderful chapter.
Sol of Stella chapter 8 . 10/27/2013
Great update! I love the way your plot unfolds and everything intertwines perfectly. I was so happy that you included a few of the older fairies like Katy and Amaryl. I wish we would have seen them in action more. The "battle" scene felt a little jumbled and confusing to me, but maybe it was just me. I still understood everything I was just slightly confused at what exactly was going on. Otherwise, great job!
PierceTheVeil chapter 8 . 10/25/2013
They're trying to kill Diaspro? I thought she'd be kidnapped for ransom. But maybe it is still: there could have been anything in that needle. Krystal's fairy form sounds pretty: if they showed it in the series, I didn't see. Hope Roxy gets her Winx soon.
And I still say Griselda might be one of the mysterious females. It's possible they are one and the same person (and not her), but somehow, I got the impression it was a larger operation (no idea where that came from, though, me and conspiracy theories: you can expect it).
I look forward to the next update, and have no complaints. Well, some, but probably autocorrect of 's fault instead of yours. But it's all proper grammar, and I'm glad. May seem petty to some, but it honestly bothers me when things aren't proper grammar! Great story, you have here.
signourney chapter 8 . 10/25/2013
Oh yes Riven, we know where your loyalties lie with lolol. Getting some from Musa. Everything else is so trifle huh haha.

Love the addition of all the other girls and some of the older ones taking charge. From the show one would think they have no talents in these things.
I like that you added in that Diaspro's skin is coated in diamond. As the fairy of diamonds that is a normal thing for her to have :)
Nentone chapter 8 . 10/25/2013
With Krystal feeling that way, its just only a matter of time before that tension snap. Sometimes, I ask myself how you weave such.

And with the Trix around. That just makes matters worse.

Great update :D
LuminaDelacour chapter 7 . 10/22/2013
Another wonderful chapter. I really liked it and am waiting eagerly for the next one.
PierceTheVeil chapter 7 . 10/17/2013
Fair enough. And while don't have specific examplesoff the top of my head, I will politely point them outin the future. Sometimeswith certain words, it can be difficult to notice, but othersjust make it difficult to tell where the last word ends and the next begins. (See above for a couple on-purpose examples)
Like I said before, it isn't a huge deal, only something I noticed. In every review I do, I always try to comment on at least one thing I loved, one thing that can be better, one question for the author, and one thought/expectation of what's yet to come. I think it helps people more than just a few words or begging for an update. And now to the real review:
I don't know what I was expecting, but this was not it, and for that, I love it! Everybody loves a good twist! Was Griselda the mysterious female in the last chapter? That was an amazing ending, truly! Hm... for the events yet to come, I'm thinking one of the girls (Krystal, Nova, Galetea, Roxy, or Diaspro) might discover 'something they shouldn't' but no one listens because they're all too worried about Tritannus. And I'm not sure, don't hold me to this, but I think the Griselda thing may be a red herring/distraction. I've no proof, only think that if that's what it is, it would be clever with a capital C. And now for a concrit,... this is hard, you're chapter was really good. I just I can't think of one right now. Great chapter!
signourney chapter 7 . 10/17/2013
Oh Nova, I'm sure Zadien has the perfect guy set up for you, somewhere in the shadows.

Krystal is obviously projecting her own thing on Genni. Who is Genni's boyfriend?
Nice Chapter, was waiting on the Riven an Musa momenty. Riven can be so cute.
Nentone chapter 7 . 10/17/2013
Ahh, another amazing chapter. Seriously, I was chuckling at what Griselda did to that fairy student, alongside Nova and Galateas reactions. Very amusing.

And I trust you to update very soon. With a cliff-hanger like that, the clock just begun counting down. Tick-tock, tick-tock...
Ella Anders chapter 7 . 10/17/2013
Another great chapter, apologies for not reviewing previous installments. Really love seeing all the character interactions, as well as just generally seeing Roxy.
Akela Victoire chapter 7 . 10/17/2013
Yes! I am so glad I logged back on tonight when I had no intention to do so earlier, otherwise I would have had to wait a whole day to read this!

Introducing Karel... I like to see comic characters used more in fanfics, something I'll try to do myself, eventually.

Ah, Musa and Riven. They're not even my favourite canon couple (Tecna/Timmy fan, as you know), yet you make me enjoy them every time you write them, even if it's just for a little bit.

Explosion and screams... The action is about to really kick in, I guess...

Looking forward to another update!
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