| Reviews for Hello Again |
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AANNOONN chapter 2 . 7/9/2016 UWAAAAAA! Indonesian, eh? :D Tadinya saya mau ngereview pake bahasa inggris *ceileh, sok inggris gue -_-*, tapi berhubung saya sempet liat bio'nya Author-san, saya jadi ngerasa lebih enakan ngereview pake bahasa ibu :) *alesan -_-* Yosh, intinya saya suka sekali sama fanfic ini! Saya suka idenya, terutama bagian traumanya si Petra sama pohon gede *ano..itu bisa dibilang trauma juga, kan?* Ayo dong Author-san, fanficnya dilanjut.. :'( nanggung loh ini.. sayang kalau ceritanya udah bagus gini, tapi harus terbengkalai karena suatu sebab yang saya tidak mengerti :'( |
ys chapter 2 . 11/6/2013 I loved how you really made them Levi and Petra through her having that fear of trees, it kind of gave me a sense it's Petra and not just a school-girl who is supposed to be her. A genius twist! But I think it's a little sad that at the end of the chapter you rushed so much. I think your writing is good and you have strong ideas you should trust in more. I would love to read about Levi finding out about Petra's fear of trees and maybe having them kind of remember who they were and who they are. I hope this doesn't come across as rude, but don't turn this into every japanese shôjô story. Your writing is lovely and your ideas are great I also think you grasped the characters well, so do your thing, I'd love to read it. |
supertengyattack chapter 2 . 10/3/2013 THIS IS SOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL! EGVYWEFGVRDYTFUYGIUDEHVCIWUEVIUEWHUWEFVH CONTINUE THIS PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! THIS STORY CANT BE FINISHED YET! EFCGYOEWFYGOUWEGF PLEASE. UPDATE. IT! /Sobs/ PLEASE! |
Hani chapter 2 . 10/3/2013 I really love how sweet this is! 33 levi and Petra were meant to be I tell you! This was actually the first time I've ever commented on a fanfic because I've never felt the need to before..but I just want to support you! And I really couldn't tell that english was your 2nd language! Please please please update this :3 |
xnightdx chapter 2 . 9/24/2013 Oh I love this. Me and probably like half of the world is still devastated by Petra's death. So this is refreshing in way to me. I hope to see more soon! ) |
LaraHawke chapter 2 . 9/20/2013 oh god.. I REALLY LOVE YOUU! amazing chapter! you immediately made my day (even if I lost my phone today)! |
Arisu Ral chapter 2 . 9/19/2013 OH MY GAWD I LAHVE ITTTT ! *fangirls* I DON'T CARE ABOUT THE GRAMMAR. I WILL STILL LAHVE IT. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY. I JUST LAHVE IT. |
Beth.RC chapter 1 . 9/17/2013 I hope the next chapter :D |
GirlSchifffer chapter 2 . 9/17/2013 Hello! Very good your fic. I hope the next chapter: 3 Meanwhile, can I translate it into Spanish? Only sets the requicitos and I gladly fill up. Until then, I hope your answer. Bye |
Moon Blossom Xx chapter 2 . 9/17/2013 Oh! I thought i was logged in when i left my message...anyways I am the Guest who mentioned the kiss and fight scene! |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/17/2013 Gosh, this is just adorable! I know its hard to write in English when is not your first language (I have the same problem) but take it easy on yourself! As long as everyone understands what you are trying to say, it'll be fine (: and through reviews anyone can tell you which grammar mistakes you need to correct! :D I would love to see their first kiss in the next chapter but take your time... it would also be nice if one time they had a fight and just you know make up because even if Levi is a pain, they are MEANT to be together. I think your story is the type of story you can exploit. Meaning there are many theories the fans have when it comes to Levi and Petra meeting in a next life-use that to your advantage! :D Great work, keep it up! And if you ever need anything, I bet your readers (me included) will help you! |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/16/2013 Really enjoying it, looking forward to the next chapter. Had to chuckle at her tree phobia xD And I don't see any issue with your english :D |
ello chapter 2 . 9/16/2013 How nice :) I love the idea of them having another chance in another life. This is so wonderfully sweet. Would love to read more! Great job! |
callionope chapter 2 . 9/15/2013 waaa. so sweeet :) i liiiiike this now ;) update moooore! |
GelelTapir chapter 2 . 9/15/2013 I think it would be interesting if you did a chapter where they went on a field trip to the mountains and they got lost in the woods where there are a lot of big trees to see how each of them would react. |