Reviews for Celestial Gift
The Timmynator chapter 3 . 9/27/2014
He won't have an Armor Ability. He's ODST, not Spartan.
Also, he's taking the whole thing pretty calmly.
The Timmynator chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
"I braced myself as I saw a flaming mongoose coming directly at my drop pod."
Which, by the way, sounds hilarious if taken out of context.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/27/2014
Even though the two universes are separated you gave at least a former solder a chance at peace. Russell E. Shuey
MurderSassin chapter 12 . 4/10/2014
Come on really, he is a trained super soldier, even I can headshot something from 10 meters. He should be able to headshot the mantilores from at least 100 with the assault rifle, and he only hits one ear with a WHOLE MAG, dang what shit has he been trained! Aside from his assfuck accuracy the story is amazing! :P
Joss10 chapter 4 . 1/28/2014
GHHFFFFXFNBFFBOB. I know that song. Children of the Night. I have it on my MP3 player.
Joss10 chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Wow. Very interesting. I like how you merged Halo and MLP.
Blubb burn chapter 13 . 12/28/2013
Not just for this chapter but for the whole story in general, this is really great, no offense but I thought you were just bragging about your "professional" writing, mid chapter 2 I realized I was wrong! Very nice story!
Do you just have a knack for writing or did you get into language arts a lot?
The Officer That Left chapter 15 . 12/28/2013
well this tops it off,

ti's a shame that this story was short. oh well.
OnYx176 chapter 15 . 12/28/2013
ahhh a great happy couple XD. Keep up the awesome work man ;D
The Divide - Death Bringer chapter 15 . 12/27/2013
ill see you there
GoofTroop chapter 15 . 12/27/2013
Damn it dude. I want to continue to read this. The way you showed how much love they have for each other you could bring so many different things into it. Changelings, another pony who is jealous. ANYTHING. I enjoyed your story dude and all of your work so far. Keep up the good work!
godzillafan1 chapter 14 . 12/24/2013
wow so this is the final chapter? are you going to write a sequel or is this it for steel and celestia? oh well this was a good story guess it's safe to say that steel does love celestia and vice versa this is godzillafan#1 saying sayonara maybe we'll meet again in the future bye bye.
The Divide - Death Bringer chapter 14 . 12/24/2013
ok i guess. infinity out
OnYx176 chapter 14 . 12/24/2013
this feels nice i see a gap in their future right now so exciting XD. Great story man keep it up and also ur awesome work
johnnyomon chapter 14 . 12/24/2013
man well if you have time please try and continue the story. thank you
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