| Reviews for Whole Again |
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MrsChipRockefeller chapter 2 . 8/14/2016 Aw loved them hanging out and playing together |
MrsChipRockefeller chapter 1 . 1/24/2016 Love this and can't wait to see what Dave and Jack and Henry get up to |
hurricanehorse chapter 5 . 5/31/2015 thank you for this |
hxchick chapter 5 . 4/27/2014 Aw, love seeing Dave in the uncle/dad role! I love that 2 little boys wore the profiler extrodinaire out! Your family stories rock (well, all of your stories rock, actually) and this one was well written and cute! |
p95000 chapter 2 . 9/17/2013 Dave would of been an excellent dad. Gotta love Jack Henry and Mudg. |
SuzySorrowLess chapter 5 . 9/17/2013 this was such a beautiful story, thank you for this. Rossi would be a perfect Dad, I suppose. |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2013 Thank you so much for another wonderful story. You have the ability to draw pictures and develop personalities with words. I will miss your frequent stories but will look forward to your revitalized return. Thank you for sharing with us. Hope all goes well. |
CMFAN2009 chapter 2 . 9/15/2013 very good second chapter. The story of Dave saving that little girl was sad but glad it had, like with your nephew, a happy ending. Jack and henry and even Mudge were cute in that chapter. |
CMFAN2009 chapter 1 . 9/15/2013 Great plan from JJ and Hotch to get Dave out of his funk. Nothing like kids to get anyone out of their depression. LOVE Anderson humor! Let's hope Hotch and Beth will really have fun! lol! great first chapter! |
MidnightWolf191 chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 Have a nice break, I'll be here waiting for more stories when it's over! And I was waiting for you to take a break, you've been writing wonderful stories very quickly, and I loved them all! |
HGRHfan35 chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 We all need Family time to sustain us. Alone time is also a necessity but Family is all. I grant you your time off, I know you need it :) See you in the morning! |
HGRHfan35 chapter 4 . 9/15/2013 Beautiful *sniff* |
sdia75 chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 Great, Will asking HOtch if he's training Beth to become a profiler :) Lol at JJ asking Dave if a couple of boys wore him out. Well, my students are not so little but they tend to wear me out when they don't do their homework. Mudgie not stirring when the guests entered - sounds like Dax in her old age. Really nice conversation between JJ, Dave and Hotch, JJ and Hotch both knowing that Dave 'heard' Erin last night. SO good of JJ to organize this 'feel better' gig for Dave and for her to recognize that it actually helped him. Really enjoyed this piece Rocky. Hope all is okay with you and all the other stuff in your life goes well. Even I'll be a bit busy after next week with work stuff because our British exam board decided to suddenly change the curriculum in the middle of the year (a bit absurd. They have changed before but always before the summer break) but we'll still chat on the board right, and discuss the episodes. |
Skater3 chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 Hurray - You had Rossi make my favorite breakfast pizza - But, you forgot the mushrooms! Try throwing a can of mushrooms in next time. |
pamstel chapter 5 . 9/15/2013 Great story. Loved the boys helping Rossi to heal. Nice with the breakfast pizza. Crescent rolls make everything awesome. |