Great stuff! Intriguing the whole way through and incredibly fun in the later chapters. I love your characterization of FP in this and the adventure they go on matches the early show’s tone to a T. Especially liked that tangent at the end about underground kingdoms, that’s TOTALLY something the show would do. Great work! I’m just a little disappointed it’s been abandoned, this idea should be explored more!

OH MY GLOB I LOVE IT

knowing bubblegums character especially after the finally and this being before she met f and j, reconnected with marcy etc I'm surprised her first instinct wasn't to turn phoebe into a candy person to solve the heat issue.

No updates in 5 years?
I find this hmmmmmmm... UNACCEPTABLE!

Please make more of this fanfic

Please make more

I would enjoy this more if the narrator left me to figure things out on my own instead of nearly spelling out every detail.

When will be the next chapter?

Peppermint Butlwr is best (kind of secretly evil) butler.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

I don't know if you look at these anymore, but I just want to say this has been one of the most heartwarming and enjoyable reads I've gone through in a long time. I really hope that, maybe one day, you decide to update the story or pass it along to another author. I wish you the best of luck in any of your endeavors.

Wow, great twist ending!

This is a great story. Hope you update one day.

Man, usually Adventure Time fanfictions are God awful, but this one was actually really damn good. Legitimately the only AT fanfic I've read that serves the show justice. It's a real shame that it wasn't continued, and it probably never will be, unfortunately. And it ended literally right before it was about to get into the course of the show's timeline, too... Well, anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed what was written. Favorited for sure and also followed in the bleak hope that there may be an update one day.

Yeah keep telling yourself that bonnie