please update this story soon! please!

Where is party two!
PLS
PLS
PLS

Will you be doing an AU of this story were it's the 10th doctor that finds Laea either when he's with rose or when he's with Martha cause when the doctor turns human in the episode human nature Laea could turn human with him and the human doctor thinks she his daughter. I hope you do a story like that.

Next part?
This is like ur best one and u haven't done it (-_-) Plz make a plot twist like Laea turing evi

When Amy gets kidnapped by the silence, I hope Laea doesn't get kidnapped as well. Plz update soon.

part 2 ?

Next part plz

Part 9 where is it x

Update plz ?

Amazing , cant wait for part two . Best fanfiction i have read yet .

Awsome but wheres part two love how you have involved real parts from the tv and your own bits . But where is part 2 and maybe when Laea finds out about galifrey she leaves and goes agianst the doctor like she is the reason behind the pandorica and she went back in time but yeah love your story so far butpart 2 please

So much greatness and fluff. Umm its going to be a bumpy ride for Laea in the Doctor's adventures. Can't wait for the next.

Wow. I can't believe how amazing this story is! You've captured The Doctor's personality perfectly, and I feel as though this could be an actual episode! Everything he says fits his character, which is very impressive. Laea is adorable, by the way! Her and The Doctor's relationship is so cute! I really can't wait to see what you write next, so please update soon!

I am so in love with this! Keep writing, please.

An other boring chapter?! Dare I say this was amazing. Just imagining Matt Smith running around with a child like Laea is just adorable. And 11 just asking if he did alright or not, come on he did quiet brilliantly. Anyways like I said amazing chapter and I hope u update with more soon as well ;)