Add more chapters please

Great story! So well written, and fascinating the way you mixed various pack dynamics with alpha/omega tropes and made it all work in the avengers world! And Tony and Loki were so sweet at the end, but still themselves!

Gay bridge

awww that was a cute ending. loved the whole story

Beautifully done!

love it please keep up the good work

Imagining Tony dying of old age and Loki breaking into pieces in progess :'(

You're not bad at this whole pack stuff

This will forever be my favorite Omega!verse I have ever read.
It's just that amazing!

Look. At. My. BABIES! LOOK AT EM! I LOVE THEM! WITH THEIR STUPID FACES AND UGH!

Awwww, happy ending :). There were a couple of rough patches, thanks to Thor, Fury and Baldr, not to mention Loki's own expectations of what his omega status meant for him, but they got through it in the end.

I liked your take on the pack dynamics and a/b/o tropes and enjoyed the banter and teasing. It was good to see Loki find his way in the pack from always tense and wary to becoming lead alpha with Tony.

Laura

This was freakin adorable!

This was terrific. I never really got into ABO stories at first, but I've discovered I really like the ones that explore interpersonal dynamics rather than just who does whom and who gets pregnant (I'm really over "Fill me with your seed! Give me your babies!" dialogue). And honestly with the fanon that jotunn are intersex, the complexities are actually interesting and enjoyable to read.

Also you have good grammar and in a freelance editor so is hard for me to let things slide when it's bad. So thanks for that. :)

Please tell me there's more? Children maybe? And a possible alliance between earth and jotunn b/c humans dont treat their omegas the way the rest of the realms seem to unless they're asshole?

Love it, there's no helping it. Second time reading this, I think I said enough in the first review.