This was a really cute story! I had fun!

Brilliant ending. Seriously, I love the fact that Adam didn't give up his immortality for Kurt. That would be a lot of pressure to put on a relationship. I mean, even the best couples fight and have bad periods. If Adam had given up his whole existence simply because of Kurt, it probably would have led to at least a little resentment down the line. At the very least, there would be the temptation to throw it into Kurt's face whenever they have a fight - "I gave up my immortality for you, and you won't even do this one thing that I ask of you?" Adam wouldn't mean it, but it might slip out in the heat of anger or something, and then Kurt would feel guilty.

Instead, Adam made his own decision to become mortal, without expecting Kurt to take him back. It was based on what he wanted, not what he thought that Kurt deserved. And I'm sure that he was at least thinking that he might be able to win Kurt back if he became mortal, but he wasn't pressing the issue and he didn't do it solely for Kurt's sake. That's what matters.

The ending was absolutely adorable. Wonderful. :)

Also! I normally read fanfiction on my phone, but I'm on the computer today, so this was the first time that I've gotten to see the cover art. It is incredible! Seriously, it's better than the covers that I've seen on some actual novels.

I really like this... It's well written and charming. Looking forward to more ;)

sweet babies oh my god

Lovely story! :)

I missed reviewing the last chapter, so I'll do both right now. :)

I'm with Adam - it is so adorable that Kurt thought that Adam was a Twilight vampire! Oh my gosh, I was laughing so hard at that part. And the line "Are you being British again?" For some reason, I just think that's hilarious. That paragraph is my favorite.

Even though I knew that Finn was going to die, my heart just broke when Kurt said, "I'll fix it." I knew exactly what he was going to ask of Adam, and I knew that it wouldn't work. Seriously, my heart completely shattered.

And then the story ends with Adam staring at the building. Is he going to go up there and jump? Is he going to talk to Kurt again? Please write soon - I have to know! :) Wonderful job!

ouch. this chapter hurts.

WAHT WHY WOUKD UOU EBD TI TGERE ONG

I just started reading this, and ended up racing through all four chapters, and all I can say is that this is incredible. Absolutely amazing, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Also, I need to add that I love Emma in this. You did a wonderful job with her.

I never watched Glee, but I saw part of City of Angels yesterday. Now I understand what you are doing. Good story.

wait what why is he crying? D:

oooooh foreshadowing :3

It's so great so far. Really excited for the next part.

oh Adam, poor baby :(