This is Deprived, except you switched Fleur with Tonks. And it's not even subtle; this chapter is basically a mirror for one of Deprived's. At least acknowledge the influence, don't pretend this is original.

too bad it's not a harem

This is such an amazing story. Please please update soon.

Are you still continuing this?

this story has become stupid i hate you and every author like you who fuck up there stories with these bull shit crossovers

It is only slightly believable that an orphan (talking about Harry here) who lived in a semi-abusive home for eleven years wouldn't know a thing about sex and so would be completely socially retarded.

For a "Hitwizard", a person that is contracted to go out and kill, not to have even the slightest clue what it means for red-in-the-face girls to be looking his way, giggling, and showing him so much attention is just plain impossible. Not to mention the fact that Harry is a 6th year here.

Another thing, apparently Harry shows up to the Great Hall in only boxers and a towel and then...nothing. No vocal reactions to his attire? No professors coming to him to demand an explanation as well as him putting on some decent clothes if not a robe.

One more thing; you repeat yourself constantly. In dialouge, that has already been established between two characters, you do not need the speakers (especially since they are all friends) to constantly say each other's names simply for the sake of doing it.

Wow, if this isn't just a crappy version of Deprived

All I know is I better see Flora and Hestia

Hi I love love love this story! How long until Alex/Harry gets back to Hogwarts? I really want to hear Tonks reaction when she see's him!

'Most doctors and pharmacists buy store brand medicines'...that was the ad on this chapter...just thought you should know...

Hello. Great fic. Looks like the poison is doing it's work so how about having Alex rise his hand at Greyback while thinking death ? You could show it as the last desperate action. The other werewolves could be stopped by Lupin who takes leadership over this pack and after a short talk with Alex they flame to Hogwarts and use patronus charms to fend off dementors (Alex could pass out then and be flamed by one of his birds).

As for the pairing I love Harry/Tonks and really like it that you concentrate on them, but latter on in the story you could play it in a way that both Vampires and Veela will insist on a marriage between Alex and a female of their kins (the distrust between races could be so huge). Tonks I think would understand the dire situation and agree to share -I mean it's better to share her loved one with few other women than to see him dead.

Hmm, if you decide to go for that idea at some point then you could also picture Harry as a second Merlin at least in a way. You could have Dumbledore mention something (could be while he describe Alex's marriage situation to Tonks) about magical unity between races was always and still is the greatest dream and a goal of every great light wizard in history, but since the times of Merlin no one come even close to achieve it, not even himself.
It's something to consider for the future. I think I'd like to read about a mission in the France, war, more of Alex/Tonks, his relationship with the Potters and more of his interactions with Vampires and Veela in general before (if ever) that happens.

At this time I think it's the best possible scenario, but the choice is yours. I'd be perfectly satisfied with just Harry/Tonks. The idea above is meant as a possibility for hmm, the near end part of the story. Just consider.

Once again great work.

The story seems to be heavily based upon Deprived by The Crimson Lord. Particularly with the bar scene in Knocturn alley, some of the dialogue is almost word for word.
You could at least give a shout out to The Crimson Lord as in inspiration to your story

Great as always

very detailed chapter. keep it up.

Great story