Yo, wtf

y dis ded tho

Seriously, good story. It's been a while, but I will wait for more. I look forward to it. (Mainly because I'm a sucker for humanoid pokemon in an alternate universe stories.)

Interesting idea and plot and chapter

Now there is one flaw in the first part that I noticed...

Girantina... Took it too lightly... Look yes girantina is from distortion realm aka hell aka void,a point of no return unless girantina wishes it,but even then that does not mean that even if he sensed the same void in Louise that he could suddenly become curious,he's supposed to be violent stated by his pokedex

It would have been better if you made him a much more intimidating character where the students back off after seeing the master and the one who governs the distortion realm girantina appear and probably gave a good opportunity to screech again scaring the students even more while making Louise stand her ground but is still scared shirtless by his presence,then you could have maybe done some justice [not like you haven't just that girantina had a personality issue here]

Now this does sound harsh but take a moment before posting,does the scene make sense?,is the character on point? [Optional not all of us can completely make a exact copy of there persona], is this how I want it to be?,should I rush it?,or should I consult my friends if I done some justice?

That's all really sorry for the lengthy rant

...still waiting to see what will happend...

This'll be quite a unique bit of fun:-)

aye arceus incoming

Giratina is my favourite Pokemon

Please continue this fanfic, it is really hooking me to the story line. I really want to know what happen after Louise and Giratina went back to the academy after this incident. Please continue this fanfic, it is too amazing to stop.

cant wait to see more

Are the other legendary Pokemon angels too? I kind of imagine some of the other 'outcasts' and nicer ones coming to help Giratina when Arceus finds out. I hope you continue this story some day! It's really good!

Niiiccce~

Louis is weak. If she ever attempts to humanise Giratina, then she deserves the most horrendous of deaths. And well truly, Giratina is righteous, and Justice is on his side, I cannot fault his actions. Time has imprisoned him long enough as imprisonment.

Aw shit. Arceus woke up...

Everything is perfect except for the length. Really, I've read tons of FoZ crossovers and not that many have the quality you do.

Aaaaaaaa such a cool original idea its awsome that idea its so fricking good omg i feel so happy reading it thanks for making it