Great beginning
but when will you post the next chapter.

I don't suppose you intend to continue?

Looking forward to the continuation of this

I'm a total grammar-centric writer, and I hate seeing potentially amazing stories like this ruined by question marks that inexplicably become periods, or other minor problems like this. The story is fine as it is, but nudging up the grammar standard would improve it so much! :)

Happy writing,
Aeranythe Echosong

Ooo nice opening chapter! I can't wait to read more! I hope you update soon!

please continue the story. love the prolouge

I like your fanfic
i don't understand th english good , but it's still great :D
i love remember me , and Edge 3

i will follow your fanfic and i will wait another chapter .

Sorry for my bad english.

Remember you soon!

;D