I hope this fic is udated soon, such a good story.

Fiction k doesn't have swearing, but I like it none of the less.

OH MY FUCKING GOD WILL YOU JUST UPDATE!

He's adorable when for some weird reason Fred's
Unsure of himself yet thank heavens his best friend
Has his back meaning this crazy duo will be cooking
Up a intoxicating love potion /prank to delight this
Particular bushy haired witch whom is a secret
Prankster herself though I'd use the term cautious
After what happened never mucking up no weasley
Does that mean except for Ron occasionally though
I'm hoping lavender doesn't hurt him plus exactly
What are they planning unless there's something
Special coming up at hog warts however I'm
Pleased both Harry and Ron really miss her
I was never sure ,poppy must be a closet
Romantic she wasn't sure about James potter
At looking forward to the next utterly
Bewildering very colourful happy idyllic
Romantic witty high octane contagiously
Decadent contagious exhilarating wicked
Sizzling unforgettably stylish compulsive
Perfect addictive incredibly fascinating
Love story but thank you so very much
For an unstoppable wondrous beautiful
Complex realistic humane classy love
Story thank you so very much for
Your outstanding creative dynamic
Gorgeous love .love Elizabeth skinner.

How couldn't he recognise the most beautiful witch
Whom has finally decided to take pride in her
Appearance being a bookworm doesn't mean you
Have to look messy plus she's truly stunning as
No one would've thought it was her .hes afraid
Of the hospital wing that's weird as poppy had
Seen worse students there actually the marauders
Yet she loves these twins in reality but she cannot
Show partiality except she is petite but never
Short which isn't gentlemanly to imply for a
Weasley Molly would be shocked by the way
Harry's mother was almost the same height
As hermione though a bit taller I'm hoping
For one of the biggest sparkling weasley
Parties in this upcoming chapter as they
Had the funniest greatest parties that
No one could compete with although
I'd love to see this magnificent
Undoubtedly beautiful spunky
Intriguing wacky adorable
Very insightful spell binding
Happy cheerful gorgeous
Magically blessed classy
With wonderful pranks
Great friendships trust
So thank you very
Much for this
Exquisite tender
Gracious love story
It's Elizabeth skinner

Since when has Fred stopped himself from kissing
Her before yet now he's gotten far to honourable
Which doesn't make any sense she Never fell
Out of love with him of course she was angry
And hurt rightly so but he brings out the very
Best in the opposite is true as well that
Actually says that there's nothing which will come
Between them in the future plus regulus black would
Agree with her spew for the house elves As he was
Close to kreacher though naturally George comes
First thAts the unique mystical bond between
Twins causing them to be double the trouble
In so many ways as all of them are but none
As strong as these truly unforgettably handsome
Devilishly divine twins whom can drive witches
Crazy with just a smile amagnifique
Sublime poignant heartfelt touching charming
Sizzling stirring terrific enthralling sumptuous
Extra crafty brilliant cosy romantic love story
That's completely sassy great repartee plus
Totally ridiculous in the weasley magnetic
Colourful honourable smoking hot type
Of quixotic way I truly do love this
Original masterpiece written by
An amazingly intrepid sensationally
Gifted writer whom has that
Remarkable mysterious talent which
Will take them far as every fremione
Addict just Loves this incredible
Tough love bright unforgettably
Humorous love story which will
Last for an eternity and beyond
So thank you very much for
Gifting your reviewers this
Delightful fuzzy feeling strong
Love . Love Elizabeth skinner.

Really umbridge must've been more unpopular than
Bellatrix was at hog warts as boys and girls ar
Never supposed to be kept apart their
Raging hormones take over heaven forbid besides
Harry knew whom took his invisibility cloak and
It didn't worry him he just wants her to laugh
And smile again plus their hidden pool won't be
Discovered as merl in put a powerful spell on it
To protect it from evil doers and these lovebirds
Are getting back yet stronger than the way both
Felt before no one said true love wasn't rocky
That's no fun besides they've made it through
The rain though umbridge did get her just
Rancid desserts in the end I'm over the moon
Stars and planets over how extremely thrilling
This must read love story has added another
Deep insightful outcome to this superlative
Entrancing warm hilarious bravest
Scintillatingly complex yet thought
Provoking I'd like to see unbridge
Hurting soon if you could please
But every potter head will no doubt
Give this two thumbs up plus a
Trillion billion golden stars also
For its brilliance that captures
Our hearts so thank you very
Much guten Elizabeth skinner.

How absolutely tremendous Fred has discovered a new
Tunnel which had remained hidden for over fifty years
That the marauders couldn't find hallelujah plus it's an
Inspiring way to get back into her good graces hmm that
Seems far to easy still I'm so sure that hog warts has
A number of challenges invented by a witch that will
Test him rather interestingly until he changes for good
But not completely or he wouldn't be the Fred we all
Adore it's time for a long lovely relaxing swin in these
Magical waters for awhile though maybe they should
Tell George about it being there though maybe Marlin
Put it right there for a purpose and no I think this
Water comes from Camelot just under where the
Dragons lived making it extremely powerful magic
For the most magically powerful honourable students
At hog warts so these two deserve a couple of more
Minutes at least it's grand to know this secret wasn't
Discovered by. The marauders but waited for a
Red haired wizard whom could put prank them.
This has become the most illuminating humorous
Fast paced glorious actually delightfully rainbow
Coloured superb dazzling chapter as it's such
An adventurous daring unique challenging way
He's finally winning her golden purest strong
Heart that's always been his though she won't
Tell him that thank you for this amazingly
Unforgettably divine totally impractical yet
Remarkably original innovative creative
Beautiful decadent loving honest truly
Inspirationally exciting magnetic love
Story full of love laughter tears and
Now happiness and joy so thank
You very much for this perfect
Roller coaster adorable completely
Whimsical fun loving ironic yet
Courageous exacting gorgeous love
Story it's utterly bewitching thank
You so very much Bon soir. Love Elizabeth
Skinner.

Well he's actually going to know how it feels being
Savaged by someone he loves but honestly did
Fred really think that it would be so easy just an apology
Which was rather lame at lest his first one still he's
Got time though she ought to make him jump
Through hoops and some fiery challenges to prove
The truth except nothing to dangerous but once he
Started it she's been hurt to badly but right now he
Does need Georges help though hermione can tell
Them apart she's never lied to him and I retrospect
I'm glad that Molly never found outa out the bet
However exactly what he's going to have todo
Is going to be very highly amusing personally I'm
Hoping he has to go on a quest to win her heart
All over again one filled with danger enough for
A brave gryffindor quidditch playing wizard can
Do tougher than any other kind with Georges help
In whatever type you choose to give him as you
Really do have a very inventive ingenious clever
Way with words that will have him achieve his
Hearts desire after say eight challenges or less
He has to do that will set his pranking heart into
Planning mode after which he can triumph with
A bigger declaration at a school dance or wherever
You will have decided to put them both maybe the
Pond at the burrow at sunset would be an absolutely
Magically thrilling way for them to start afresh with
Some loved ones looking on hoping for a very
Romantic yet crazily exhausting declaration but
I'm loving this cheerful quirky strong witty soul
Searching tender impetuous compassionate
Charming positively very wicked exciting
Adventurous undoubtedly eccentric classy
Beautiful love story I'll probably return to
Over again as there is a lesson to be learnt
In this addictive mesmerising exquisite love
Story that's proven that only the truest
Bravest totally wicked magical people need
Help In their crazy yet delightful lives as
Fate works in mysterious ways even for
Our favourites yet I'm utterly bewitched by
This tragically outstanding much loved energetic
Hyped up thoroughly excellent very curious
Entertaining highly valued typically Weasley
Redeemable brilliant exquisite touching love
Story which has had me torn between laughter
Happy tears and shocked at his daftness
Occasionally yet it's been written with warmth
Understanding compassion truthfulness yet
With exquisitely classy chapters filled with
Magically blessed decadent mysterious
Lovely challenging excitingly tense fiery
Action packed scenarios everyone loved
Very much so thank you very much for
A truly contrary unpredictable thoroughly
Fascinating yet different triumphant hopeful
Beautifully honest perplexing warm fuzzy
Crazed accurate entertaining courageous
Intriguing love story glorious intrepid
Written with great weasley love through
Out this perfect gorgeous romance so
Thank you very much for an outrageously
Outstanding love .love
Elizabeth skinner.

I'm getting quite fed up with Fred so very easily even
Her worst enemies would know that hurting the
Golden girl of gryffindor should send him to
Prison he's going to be in so much pain
Preferring that snake to hemione how
Ridiculous but he's hurt her worse than
Harry or Ron could've she trusted him
Then nowadays tough luck Fred you
Have no idea of how badly you've
Broken this golden girl yet but even
George could hurt you for doing it
He's your twin yet she's like another
Sister I'm pleased Fred is feeling
Somewhat guilty but let's make
Him be taught a hurtful lesson
Seeing her with someone whom
Will treat her like queen namely
Oliver wood it's time for Fred
To go through the pangs of
Jealousy how amusing this
Could turn out as your up
There among the greats in
My opinion there's a quality
In your story which has
Charmed your readers
But I'm hoping Fred has
More pain to come before
He confesses he loves her
In front of the whole school
Thank you so very much
For such a bewitching
Endearingly charismatic
Spun gold humorous funny
Exceptional wonderful
Intense feel good love
Story I'm addicted merci.
Love Elizabeth skinner.

Oh my god has Fred gone totally insane similar to
Voldemort whom never knew true love honestly
Lavender was what used to be called a good
Time girl for one night only but to deliberately
Hurt our gorgeous bright exceedingly angry
Out for revenge witch hermione his mother will
Kill him no son of hers ever treats her second
Daughter like she's a piece of scum please
Forgive that expression though he might
Catch something nasty from lavender she
Became known for certain behaviour but
Right now I'm out for Fred's blood treating
Her like she's nobody George won't be
Impressed at all why not say Alicia spinner
If the marauders were alive they would
Make him hurt in an non stop
Excruciating way they loved hermione
She reminded them of lily Evans his
Twin will kill him trust me he despises
Lavender actually the whole school
Does bit now she's not just hurt she's
Really mad he better watch out on
Second thought he needs to be
Taught a cruel lesson please make
It extremely painful and there's
Nothing wrong with your grammar
It's utterly brilliant and perfectly
Right in a number of ways plus
Highly illuminating not to mention
Appropriate plus your sense of humour
Reminds me of both Fred and George
Weasley as its very infectious as I
Cannot stop laughing at what has
Been written with so much love
And empathy yet it's profoundly
Beautiful powerful with a strength
That's made it thought provoking
Ensuring it will be talked about
Forever for the greatest enjoyable
Reasons it's totally uniquely written
By yourself I'm hooked quite
Happily thank you so very much
For this truly hypnotising zany
Colourful yet evocative puzzling
High intensity quixotic impulsive
Contagious redeemable for Fred
Unforgettable love story your
Totally awe inspiring mol to
Elizabeth skinner.

I'd start worrying this moment both of them are going
To be treated worse than Draco or anyone else for
Being so cruel unkind reptilian like towards our favourite
Witch and once ginny informs their mother they will
Have to pray for forgiveness after eating sincere humble
Pie hopefully foul tasting but George was really furious
At him maybe that might wake him up though he's
Feeling like hell I want him to be taught a lesson yet
Not in a viscous way as he's Fred still he cannot get
Away with it just please leave Harry and Ron out
Of it they only cared about her when she helped
Them besides having a broken heart caused by
Fred weasley is not bad as she's the one witch
He really fell in love with but being a mere man
He messed up big time however they both
Have to crawl on hands and knees through
Mud to win her respect and love back
But honestly a bag of candy I'd watch out
For ginny she's furious but I'm not that
Bad yet but if lavender or angelina I'm
Not counting the patil twins savage her
Then they're in the really bad books
Alongside bellatrix, Voldemort,dolohov
Nag ini,malfoy I'm still loving everything
About this inspirational outgoing fascinating
Defining warm hearted occasionally weird
In a great way naturally yet realistic
Courageously moving positive classic
Sizzling hot love story but could you
Please have hermione make Fred jealous
With say Oliver wood now he's a heart
Breaker as well I'm missing something
Else but I wouldn't change this spell
Binding interesting magical scrumptious
Love story for all the tea in China its
Beyond the infinity value it's now
Absolutely priceless in every way
Possible jk Rowling would be
Proud .love
Elizabeth skinner.

Oh please surely he's not going to begin being noble
Right now in front of everyone whom some witches
Would love to see her break down and cry yet if it
Gets back to Molly Fred will regret doing it plus
George will be furious with him there's a first time.
Yet George does know his twin better than anyone
So she'll be okay for now though as she is the
Smartest witch of her age it won't be that far away
Until she finds out that's when George has to set
Things right between these two stubborn proud
People and accept the blame after all it was his idea,
Please allow him to become more like the Fred we
All know and love brave handsome, chivalrous
Honest divine Fred everyone's favourite unless
He hurts her it might take me a whole day to
Understand why plus she can do wordless magic
Actually no one will allow that to happen besides
He's to honourable most times yet with every
Engrossing marvellous very amusing crazy
Chapter it does get harder with so many
Wicked twists and turns amid this truly
Magnetically thrilling captivating delicious
Fun loving emotional sincere love story
Which should win accolades competitions
Everything remarkably brilliant as it hits
The most enchanting golden notes with
Every scintillating chapter
Elizabeth skinner.

Honestly both lavender and Parvati have been extremely
Jealous and quite viscous over hermione since their
First year at hog warts plus neither Fred or George
Actually do consider them friends or attractive even
Unlike our gorgeously brave intelligent hermione
As both will defend her vehemently if anyone dares
To insult trust me redheads can savage any cruel
Callous vixens were experts whom cares if you
Caught them kissing they're allowed though being
Fred's plaything doesn't mean anything whereas
This witch he would kill to protect her but never
Go to prison besides hermione knows how to
Deal with trolls whom are jealous as did lily
Evans she would hex them rather badly . It's
Wonderful to see Fred trying to cease this bet
But George is having far to much fun at seeing
Him really fall In love with her to agree to it
As its for his own good .shes not giving him
Up because of those nasty trolls I'm being
Rather polite right now she's a fighter so
I'm intending to thoroughly enjoy the
Greatest chapters coming up though
Professor mcgonagall thinks the world
Of hermione so they had better be careful
But this is completely unforgettably magnificent
As every character keeps on. Surprising them
Except for these gossipers but they don't count
Although I'd love to see Luna love good appear
In it sometime as I loved her for George so
As payback for starting the bet why not give
Him his destiny Luna .ive sincerely loved
This exceptionally enterprising love story
Since chapter one yet it improves so
Brilliantly with warmth understanding love
Quirkiness strength sassiness excellent
Flirting friendship plus fierce redhaired twins
But I'd love to see some more of their family
Just not Ron come into your beautifully well
Worded exciting yet frustrating love story
Which has everyone on tenterhooks your
A genius congratulations. Elizabeth skinner.

So he's not exactly living up to his playboy
Lifestyle taking her to the kitchen is exactly what
George had planned from the start of this ludicrous
Bet as she's the only gorgeous very smart witch
Good enough for Fred in his eyes all in all I'm
Just loving the way this exquisitely tender love
Story is turning out to be the penultimate one
As each chapter just gets more like two great
Friends whom unknowingly are attracted to each
Other there's no cruelty no viscousness on the
Terribly incorrigible twins part just their wacky
Sense of humour as neither would hurt hermione
They would rather be in slytherin so both will
Be forgiven eventually plus he's rather chivalrous
Towards her these two belong together it's true
Yet this glorious way you've got of putting a
Different spin as I never thought he would do
An Amos dig gory but that's another story but
It wasn't as brilliantly written with such love or
Thoughtfulness creativity flair a delightfully wicked
Sense of the most ridiculous weasley humor which
Comes through with such poignancy wittiness clever
Indescribable scenarios that capture your readers
Potter like imaginations courtesy of your complete
Inventive genius mind at work delivering this mind
Blowing soul searching enchanting love story with
A twist Elizabeth skinner.