| Reviews for The Stone in the Sword |
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Child of Dreams chapter 8 . 5/26/2019 Balinor? SQUEEEEE! |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/11/2019 An interesting story... A loooot of backstory and details to pay attention to but it was pretty good. I felt bad that Arthur's birthright was taken away like that and even though I'm happy for Morgana, I feel like it sucks that he couldn't have stayed a Prince and had to be humiliated like that by everyone |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2017 Sorry, I didn't mean "off to read". I meant to write "ODD to read" meaning it is different. Thank you for taking the time to write such a long story. It helped me pass a dull afternoon with a great adventure. |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/12/2017 Sorry, I didn't mean 'off to read'. I meant ODD to read, meaning it is different. Thank you. |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/12/2017 This is very different than what I expected. I'm so used to stories about Arthur and Merlin's destiny that its off to read about something else. Having said that, this is a wonderfully written, detailed work. I very much enjoyed it, even though I have one question that nagged me throughout. Why didn't Uther consider Brutus' sword was a magical instrument that should never again see the light of day? He didn't trust magic, knew it could be twisted to hurt him and his family, but still used it to show in right to rule. He, of all people, could have cried "Sorcery' if he really wanted to. Regardless, this was a very enjoyable read with a fresh perspective. |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/3/2017 Very good. I fully enjoyed reading your work. |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/3/2017 Fabulous. No matter how hypocritical he is, no one can deny that Uther loved his children and will always protect them. |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/3/2017 Wicked. Gotta love mandrake. |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/3/2017 I'm glad Morgana resisted turning evil. Very clever about the water from the Lake of Avalon. I always believed the Gaius should have understood that he needed to acknowledge that she has magic. You fixed a lot of things in canon. |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/3/2017 Another layer of complication. Merlin's destiny is really in a mess. |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/3/2017 Brilliant portrayal of Morgause introspective. |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/3/2017 So destiny can be changed. Destiny is not the same as fate. Excellent chapter. |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/3/2017 Fascinating turn of events. Arthur's reaction was very realistic, as was Morgana's. Now Arthur would have no problems marrying Gwen. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2017 Utterly amazing turn of events. Fantastic chapter. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2017 The attention to detail is fantastic. I love the bit of humour about Agravaine being saddled with the husband-hunter. |