Plz update soon

! This is so good? I love what you've written for this so far. Wow 3

Of coarse

i love the story, i went through your WHOLE profile today, so many things made me want to cry, i agree, if people want to be who they want to be, let them be it, you had SO many touching storys, and i cryed at almost all of them, but just to dry the tears up i read some of the really funny ones, wellllll, more like two thousand, but i love the "true best friends" thing, anyway loved your profile, loved the story, goodbye to all and to all a goodnight, wellllll more like 1:44 in the morning, but anyway, loved the story, hope you make more

I'm gonna do it right now!

Ok you said to tell you if I see a spelling mistake, well at the bottom's author's note you spelled thorough wrong. At least I think you were trying to put that. I think it's a bit ironic that it's just after your statement about spelling mistakes... Great story so far! :D

Leslie? Because I'm pretty sure she's Leslie.

Even though that he may be stuck as a runaway in the show and will avoid police trying to take him to the JDC or Orphanage, will there ever be chapters of Bruce bonding with him and/or trying to take in the boy?
Anyway, can't wait to see the next chapter!

Yay! A partial update!

When you were talking about the friend, at first I thought you meant Barbara, but then it was Leslie and that's pretty cool! Not to mention some out-of-the-box thinking- most would go for Babs.

Suspense, suspense. Update soon!

I'm gonna stab you. Not only was this freaking AMAZING, but I am going t o die if you don't update soon. :)

This isn't really criticism but if Gotham is across the river from Metropolis, which is in Kansas, would Gotham be in Kanasas?
Anyway, great chapter! UPDATE!

GREAT job... totally loved it! :D

two words dear:
LOVE IT.
this is great and plzzzzzzzz update. I dont like Zatanna too. I dont know why but I just do. I also hate chalant(the reason is unknown to me) anyway great fic. I am a jason todd fangirl sooo plzzzzzzzzzzz update!

:) I luv it! Update soon! :)

I really like this idea for an AU, it certainly is a unique one and I love where you're taking it! As it goes further I hope we get more info on Earth 16.2 and how it exactly differs from Earth 16, I really am curious. :D This was a great start and I hope that you continue it soon!

Connor Elric