ROFLOL! That was positively hilarious! LOLOL!

Well...

With her father I guess he may have expected her to ne able to figure things out instinctively. But she is her own person.

Ah! That last paragraph was quite suspicious.

She's not listening to his words. They seem innocuous but...

Again I'm presently surprised.

Indeed you did. But I can understand why.

This is a most fascinating twist on tried and true story elements.

Whoa!

Ouch! Insulting a potential trading partner and meeting Vaati himself. Ah well, we all make mistakes when we're in a bad mood. Link knows enough to take her at her word. And who better then the Bearer of Courage to help her through this?

Ahh the original origin of Beauty and the Beast. Its good to see someone who knows a bit about the classics.

I'm loving the references you are putting in.

Poor Poe.

Omg I fucking love your story. It has such good riding and you are really bringing the karakters to life. I actually want to make a Vaati cosplay myself. Wat do you use to make the detail on his hat?

Are you dead? Did you give up on FanFiction? Is everything okay?

I had read this a while ago when I still didn't have an account and it was up to chapter four or so. I was so happy to see that this fic has progressed a lpt since. It's incredibly well written with excellent word choices that makes it so engaging. Also love how you decided to keep Vaati a terrible man rather than a sympathetic one. I like both types but the latter is indeed overrepresented in fanfiction.
Lookin' forward to your future updates. _